Wow, way improved sequel. Way better than the first one. Keep up the great work, buddy.

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Thanks. I had been up in the air for some time if I was going to write a sequel, but I've had a lot of people recently either add the first story or ask me if I was going to write a sequel that inspired me to write it.

Looking forward to see more. I hope that Sunset wakes up, and finds time to heal physically and emotionally. Also, I hope that they will be people who help her, and who knows, she could find a family?

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Thanks.

When's the next chapter gonna come up?

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I don't have any set time frame as I'm working on several stories at once.

I know never to bring up OC's in comments of other stories. But in all honesty, I have a bastard in my midst that would consider travel to Earth a nice vacation, and cross-universe political assassination a fun activity to have right after a nice pint of dry stout. And would drooling at the possibility of getting his hooves on modern military firepower.

And is also the type to perform rituals with the bodies of his enemies and would attempt a Blood Eagle.

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Though in all honesty I better not bring anything here. It would be over to quickly and it would turn this story into a Venture Brothers style dark comedy in the end and would ruin everything you have here. Sorry.

But in all honesty it's heart wrneching reading this. Poor Sunny will never be the same, she may have to spend a year or two in a Psychiatric Ward.

She thought about if he sent someone after Luna, that would be the biggest mistake they ever made. Though Celestia was no slouch in the physical department, being a former under-twenty one power lifting champion, three time judo champion and a second-degree black belt in hapkido, Luna was in a different league on her own, she spent four years in the army and was a veteran of the short-lived Serbian conflict.

Damn

"Naw...", the first officer said again, "...you got a couple of visitors. Turn around and place your hands in front of you, palms facing each other, link your thumbs together." After Celestia had complied, the officer placed the handcuffs around her wrists.

I would not understand what he was saying.

Princess Twilight Sparkle, Princess of friendship, Grand Duchess of Smith Prefecture

When did she get that title?

Princess Celestia, Mare of the sun, Mistress of the day, Diarch of the land of Equestria "

Diarch?

"Better you to be the vice-principal than Cinch.", Celestia said flatly, "As much as I respect her, she is a total see you next Tuesday."

What is that supposed to mean?

Fluer reached inside a pocket in her pantsuit and pulled an eyeglass case. Opening it, she pulled out a pair of wire-framed reading glasses and put them on. Opening the briefcase, she pulled out some paperwork. "Wis a little help from Fancy, we were able to track down suspicious wire transfers from ze bank zat Blueblood likes to use. We've got him by ze cheveux courts et boucles. Even if he walks, his career is over, not to mention ze lawsuits he'll face." She pulled a small tape recorder and switched it on. "Before you tell me about ze ozer girl zat has been hurt, for official records, tell me about ze visit you had from Blueblood, please."

What did she just say?

Celestia sat quietly as her thoughts drifted. How was Luna holding up taking care of the school? Was Sunset going to pull out of the hospital fine or would there be physical complications? Would she come out of this fine or would she need therapy?

She needed therapy waaaay before now.

Celestia sat on the uncomfortable cot attached to the wall in a holding cell in Equus county jail. She brushed some lint off the leg of the bright orange jumpsuit with a hand and stared down at her feet sitting in the flip-flops, they had confiscated her tennis shoes. "Suicide watch.", she half-chuckled in the back of her throat, "As if I'd give Blueblood the pleasure of that. If he wants me dead, he's going to have to do it himself." She knew he had enough money and connections to hire or blackmail somebody to do it for him, if he did send someone to kill her, she would gladly die knowing that he could do it once. She thought about if he sent someone after Luna, that would be the biggest mistake they ever made. Though Celestia was no slouch in the physical department, being a former under-twenty one power lifting champion, three time judo champion and a second-degree black belt in hapkido, Luna was in a different league on her own, she spent four years in the army and was a veteran of the short-lived Serbian conflict.

Then Celestia disprove the point that all that strength muscle and training means nothing against the gun. Definitely if you get the drop on the kid with secure like five people and I'm pretty sure only two people were more responsible.

So I was looking over the penalties for first degree murder in Wisconsin it's the death penalty or life in prison.

"Well unless someone attacks you, this is all conjecture.", Fluer said calmly, "Just keep your nose clean and you head on a swivel. If someone tries to jump you, he'll have made our case much easier, just don't pick any fights. Here, fill zese forms out."

Unless someone else heard him say that that whole questioning would be conjecture it wouldn't be able to eat used in court cuz it'd be a he say she said situation

"Everybody like a piece of ass, nobody like a smart ass."

Ue

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That's why actual visitations are not open. You have a barricade between the incarcerated and their visitors that would make a bank jealous, and everything is recorded. Everything.