Kyle Schaeffer was not the first in his family to have contact with Equestria; it turns out his father befriended a changeling queen back in the 1980s. However... is there anything that could go wrong with a situation like this?
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Yeah, these chapters have been in the works for a little while now, and I was finally ready to start publishing what I had. And thanks! Glad it looks promising so far.
And it's all good. Granted, it may still take me a while to get back to you on PMs, with school back up and whatnot.
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I know; it just seems like they aren't pleased with how the world is progressing. I get the feeling they just aren't comfortable with what they're not used to.
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Okay, was just a bit worried. But, I noticed you seem to have the same copy issues as me, where it screws up some paragraphs
10439192
Yeah, really pity at times
10439209
Good. As for my late reply to the others, this reply of yours was the only one I got notified off
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I know. Hopefully the admins can fix the bugs.
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I hope so too.
Very nice. It's just the beginning, but a great one
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Thanks! And yep, there's gonna be more to come, especially with twists and turns.
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Looking forward to it! Any idea how many chapters there will be?
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Based on what I have currently planned, could be anywhere from 20-25 chapters (only an estimate, so take this with a grain of salt).
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No problem, means I can enjoy your story longer
I'm really liking this story so far!
Having a horn makes her actualy potencialy dangerous Its literally long enough to run 2-3 humans trough or one pony / Changeling
Nice that both are not longer alone.
The MC is pretty wimpy. After knowing his mother will leave, theres no longer a reason to do anything but giving Jack the finger.
Ok... So i guess cutting of the limb with the Banishment rule isnt a option to make her escape?
I guess that our Queen cant teach our human magic?
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Maybe, but I don't see Cocoon as the type to kill in that manner.
I agree.
Perhaps, but remember... she is the one who raised him, and he just doesn't want to abandon his own mother. And the idea is that William is a timid individual subjected to several hard times in his childhood.
The rune is, more or less, the only physical sign of a curse affecting her entire being. So no, cutting off the limb wouldn't do any good. Plus... I imagine Cocoon would need to be isolated for a long time and go completely insane to become that desperate.
Not quite, since, while some humans in this universe can have special abilities, pony magic is completely different.
I'm glad that these two have found each other. Hopefully they will become best friends and it evolves into them becoming husband and wife as they both deserve happiness after all the hurt they have suffered throughout their lives.
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Maybe there's a way to remove the curse tattoo without hurting Cocoon. Maybe receiving a lot of love from William can raise Cocoon's magic high enough to destroy it. Then she can show Queen Chrysalis that love is stronger than revenge and take back the hive to it's roots of living in harmony with 4 races of ponies.