absolutely incredible. i love this story so much. i mean....its INSANELY hot, just 1 of the sexiest stories on this whole site, absolutely! adding rarity to the mix is a terrific escalation of that too, she and fluttershy and applejack r the hottest of all the main girls by a wide margin and she fits so well into the dynamic. i just dearly hope we'll get a chance to see her with chrysalis as herself rather than in fluttershy's form, too....altho trust me, i am NOT complaining about any future plans for shape-shifting into doubles and other ladies! :D but i also love the story here, im really excited to see wehre this goes. i love the possibility that this is chrysalis's redemption story, as is hinted...but ill also like it if that hinting is actually to her conquering ponies with love as a love-based villain and simply being empowered and made more whole as that conqueror than she would have been through the mundane means of conquest that the show has her attempt, too. either way, i just really am into the likelihood that chrysalis is genuinely, madly in love with fluttershy and rarity (i hope we get to see more of the emotional side to that too! fluttershy had her own (wonderful!) story, hopefully rarity gets a chapter at least on earnest, emotional courtship and adoration to go with the awesome sex!), and hope we see her heart open to similarly love at least another mare or two (applejack! and zecora!). i know it took me a while to get caught up here but with a story like this u dont rush through it, u enjoy it slowly and thoroughly!
i like the idea of pinkie joining, not so much because i see her forming the same depth of love and devotion with chrysalis as fluttershy and rarity have, but more that she, unlike fluttershy and rarity, i can see as being ready and willing, once convinced of being part of this whole thing, to be the orgy-center mare that the other changelings are craving. gotta keep the minions happy, dont want an uprising to threaten this lovely, delicious thing going on with chrysalis, fluttershy, and rarity!
recs for bonus chapter? well, if its not already in ur plans, some time spent to rarity and chrysalis sincerely falling in love would be nice. if ur talking more about recs for a non-mane-6/7 to join, then 100%, absolutely, no hesitation for a single second, i vote zecora, with every thirsty fiber of my being!!!!!! zecora all day, every step of the way, 100 per cent yay!
SRSLY THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!! i know ill be late to comment on each chapter because of how i read stories of this quality but dont doubt that i CANNOT WAIT FOR EACH NEW PART!!
I forgot how good this story was.
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I like to think I know what I'm doing.
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You give off that impression.
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Appreciated. My work hasn't gotten as vocal a reception lately, so it's nice to hear.
Another one down, wonder whos gonna be next.
Awesome work, hope you keep it up till completion.
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I always finish what I start, for better or worse. Keep an eye for twists.
waiting for the next chapter with great excitement.
Thanks for the chapter!
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Should be interesting.
absolutely incredible. i love this story so much. i mean....its INSANELY hot, just 1 of the sexiest stories on this whole site, absolutely! adding rarity to the mix is a terrific escalation of that too, she and fluttershy and applejack r the hottest of all the main girls by a wide margin and she fits so well into the dynamic. i just dearly hope we'll get a chance to see her with chrysalis as herself rather than in fluttershy's form, too....altho trust me, i am NOT complaining about any future plans for shape-shifting into doubles and other ladies! :D but i also love the story here, im really excited to see wehre this goes. i love the possibility that this is chrysalis's redemption story, as is hinted...but ill also like it if that hinting is actually to her conquering ponies with love as a love-based villain and simply being empowered and made more whole as that conqueror than she would have been through the mundane means of conquest that the show has her attempt, too. either way, i just really am into the likelihood that chrysalis is genuinely, madly in love with fluttershy and rarity (i hope we get to see more of the emotional side to that too! fluttershy had her own (wonderful!) story, hopefully rarity gets a chapter at least on earnest, emotional courtship and adoration to go with the awesome sex!), and hope we see her heart open to similarly love at least another mare or two (applejack! and zecora!). i know it took me a while to get caught up here but with a story like this u dont rush through it, u enjoy it slowly and thoroughly!
i like the idea of pinkie joining, not so much because i see her forming the same depth of love and devotion with chrysalis as fluttershy and rarity have, but more that she, unlike fluttershy and rarity, i can see as being ready and willing, once convinced of being part of this whole thing, to be the orgy-center mare that the other changelings are craving. gotta keep the minions happy, dont want an uprising to threaten this lovely, delicious thing going on with chrysalis, fluttershy, and rarity!
recs for bonus chapter? well, if its not already in ur plans, some time spent to rarity and chrysalis sincerely falling in love would be nice. if ur talking more about recs for a non-mane-6/7 to join, then 100%, absolutely, no hesitation for a single second, i vote zecora, with every thirsty fiber of my being!!!!!! zecora all day, every step of the way, 100 per cent yay!
SRSLY THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!! i know ill be late to comment on each chapter because of how i read stories of this quality but dont doubt that i CANNOT WAIT FOR EACH NEW PART!!
What happened to the Pinkie Pie chapter?
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Currently experiencing technical difficulties, I am so sorry. Will be up again in about an hour.