you are doing great could you put in a chapter that he cuts the collar where it look not brock but is so ones the battle for excape so wean they start to charge the gards. make it look like the gards got the better hand but the ones charging see the gards pool the shocking device out it does not a thing
Looks like the coup was already doomed to fail from the start with noble unicorn supremist really didn't consider that no one would buy the abdication letter, and grossly over estimated their power and magic. they risk unraveling everything the three tribes managed to do together, and leaving them fractured vulnerable to predation of the other races of that world. I am betting that a LOT of unicorn peasant are going to be linched after all of this, even if they had nothing to do in all of this. I wonder if that unicorn noble is mentally sick or that he was under the predation of some dream creature that is manipulating him.
I am really enjoying the story. It has an amazing author, a "fun" and see unique premises and it has potential to go in any direction. Can't wait for the next chapter!
10724676 I'll go ahead and answer this one. There likely won't be any, mostly because the legend they are based around is a very touchy subject, and I tend to go with the minority in cases like these.
well the state of the equestia doesnt seem too good. if only they had an overly prepared and plan orentated alicorn to help them
you are doing great could you put in a chapter that he cuts the collar where it look not brock but is so ones the battle for excape so wean they start to charge the gards. make it look like the gards got the better hand but the ones charging see the gards pool the shocking device out it does not a thing
Looks like the coup was already doomed to fail from the start with noble unicorn supremist really didn't consider that no one would buy the abdication letter, and grossly over estimated their power and magic. they risk unraveling everything the three tribes managed to do together, and leaving them fractured vulnerable to predation of the other races of that world. I am betting that a LOT of unicorn peasant are going to be linched after all of this, even if they had nothing to do in all of this. I wonder if that unicorn noble is mentally sick or that he was under the predation of some dream creature that is manipulating him.
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That would also explain why there’s so few unicorns when the show starts mostly been earth ponies and Pegasus
I am really enjoying the story. It has an amazing author, a "fun" and see unique premises and it has potential to go in any direction. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Glad to see that Dusk's friends survived the initial takeover, and are even pushing back!
Man impressive a lot of Wars going on in the story and I have one question
where are the windagos
And it was pretty good
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I'll go ahead and answer this one. There likely won't be any, mostly because the legend they are based around is a very touchy subject, and I tend to go with the minority in cases like these.
Let's hope will be a quick Revolution from that unicorn