Okay. Not even past the first paragraph. Several errors. Most of it was the fact that the first paragraph was nothing but a run-on sentence. The other things were: using the wrong version of their/there/they're, using the wrong version of your/you're, and some typos such as 'of' instead of 'off' in the sentence that included, "powered your phone of." Also, you need to capitalize Anon because that is the name of the MC.
My advice, have someone else read and check your work before you post it.
Okay. Not even past the first paragraph. Several errors. Most of it was the fact that the first paragraph was nothing but a run-on sentence. The other things were: using the wrong version of their/there/they're, using the wrong version of your/you're, and some typos such as 'of' instead of 'off' in the sentence that included, "powered your phone of." Also, you need to capitalize Anon because that is the name of the MC.
My advice, have someone else read and check your work before you post it.
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Thanks for that, I’ll keep this in mind for the next chapters and stories to come
excuse me, can this be tempest's new theme, please?
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This was a wild and interesting beginning it has me super intrigued to see where this goes.