Good so far.
Grammar needs some work in my opinion.

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I’m very aware of this fact, and I’ve cleaned up mostly spelling errors, grammar mistakes I’ll have to show to brother to proof read or something like that

Great chapter!

Yay an update

This was beyond wild chapter and there first meeting ,the escape had me on edge.

That went quite quickly.

Well that escalated quickly.

Eeeh, the Mohock's were a violent British street gang, nasty bunch. The hairstyle however is spelled Mohawk.
Don't mean to sound like a jerk, Just thought you should know.

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Autocorrect sucks, it doesn’t correct shit

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