great so far dude, but I suggest doing some MAJOR proofreading before you post the next one, and look for errors in the previous two chapters because OCD is magic just kidding
I noticed that you have left me out in this chapter, as well as you have had many grammatical mistakes. I hope to be able to sign in and fix this soon, as well as a chapter of my own as we agreed! I'd love to see where this goes!
great so far dude, but I suggest doing some MAJOR proofreading before you post the next one, and look for errors in the previous two chapters because OCD is magic just kidding
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, no...just no.
I noticed that you have left me out in this chapter, as well as you have had many grammatical mistakes. I hope to be able to sign in and fix this soon, as well as a chapter of my own as we agreed! I'd love to see where this goes!
Dude I didn't know that you wanted to be in a chapter, I don't even remember agreeing to put you in a chapter.
awkward