This is my first story so give me a break.
Love the Story. Just one thing to make your story more readable, is to add a new line to a new speaker.
Oh okay thanks for the advice I'll be sure to do that in chapter two.
Alright, chapter one has been updated, if I accidentaly misspelled some words, please don't hesitate to say anything.BTW, I'm still a brony.
This is my first story so give me a break.
Love the Story. Just one thing to make your story more readable, is to add a new line to a new speaker.
Oh okay thanks for the advice I'll be sure to do that in chapter two.
Alright, chapter one has been updated, if I accidentaly misspelled some words, please don't hesitate to say anything.BTW, I'm still a brony.