Two worlds collide....
Why isn't there an OC tag?
11046706I'm not an expert on the tags. I did the most relevant ones I could think of. As I recall the number was limited.
Congratulations on entering the feature box!
11046789Thank you!
i.imgflip.com/4/mfrrm.jpg In all seriousness though, I'm glad you're back.
“Bugbear Honey, most of it looked and sounded right in line with similar items from Earth.
Missed the closing quotation mark
He struggled to find a human analog. Quidditch?
Analogue. Analog is more of an electronic thing like analog vs digital or an analog clock.
.”I do hope you two are still hungry.”
Lose the extra dot at the beginning.
“Red would you like me to walk you home?”
There should be a comma between these two.
He was definetly there. That was Earth.
Definitely
11046854I largely depend on Google for grammar and it didn't pick these up. It is most certainly not my specialty. Glad you seemed to have enjoyed it though. I'll adjust the story tomorrow with the corrections.
Holy moly, look who's back!
That date was downright adorable, and the added mystery of Cadens world lining up as well? Looks like he may one day see his family again after all.
What the hell is going on?
Magic!
oh deer
Why isn't there an OC tag?
11046706
I'm not an expert on the tags. I did the most relevant ones I could think of. As I recall the number was limited.
Congratulations on entering the feature box!
11046789
Thank you!
i.imgflip.com/4/mfrrm.jpg
In all seriousness though, I'm glad you're back.
Missed the closing quotation mark
Analogue. Analog is more of an electronic thing like analog vs digital or an analog clock.
Lose the extra dot at the beginning.
There should be a comma between these two.
Definitely
11046854
I largely depend on Google for grammar and it didn't pick these up. It is most certainly not my specialty. Glad you seemed to have enjoyed it though. I'll adjust the story tomorrow with the corrections.
Holy moly, look who's back!
That date was downright adorable, and the added mystery of Cadens world lining up as well? Looks like he may one day see his family again after all.
Magic!
oh deer