Hmm...I like this setup. The human had a realistic reaction to landing in a new land. That's suprisingly rare to find in fics, and you pull it off splendidly.
10738669 Yeah Ive always found the idea of someone just being DROPPED into an alien world and being 100% ok within minutes a little..off. :) I'd give a LOT of money to wake up in Equestria and even I would probably have a mild panic attack at the arrival.
10962788 I think of it more along the lines of despite their similarities the differences of the EQ world people keep them from being human or at least not homo sapiens. A concept that a few stories have used before.
10962788 I'm sorry I never answered this. I think I had this in my original story description. EQG just doesn't exist in this world. Sunset still had her fall and redemption arc but instead of going through a portal she just.....took over a high school somewhere or something. Zombie ponies instead. I just find stories that have both the EQG humans and our humans in it together a little odd so I made a narrative choice. Hope that makes sense! :)
Magic resistance not new but could be interesting
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Y sad?
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I'm worried for Caden and feel bad for him
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Ah. You'll see soon! :) Chapter 2 within the next day or so.
Sapient.
Sorry, bit of a pet peeve when those get mixed up.
Hmm...I like this setup. The human had a realistic reaction to landing in a new land. That's suprisingly rare to find in fics, and you pull it off splendidly.
Great work so far!
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Yeah Ive always found the idea of someone just being DROPPED into an alien world and being 100% ok within minutes a little..off. :) I'd give a LOT of money to wake up in Equestria and even I would probably have a mild panic attack at the arrival.
No Equestria Girls but Sunset is here? So she just hid somewhere from Celestia because there was no portal or what?
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I think of it more along the lines of despite their similarities the differences of the EQ world people keep them from being human or at least not homo sapiens. A concept that a few stories have used before.
10962788
I'm sorry I never answered this. I think I had this in my original story description. EQG just doesn't exist in this world. Sunset still had her fall and redemption arc but instead of going through a portal she just.....took over a high school somewhere or something. Zombie ponies instead. I just find stories that have both the EQG humans and our humans in it together a little odd so I made a narrative choice. Hope that makes sense! :)