I liked the idea of Redheart being a romantic interest, but the story and especially the relationship is too fast paced. A lot of time skips and missing crucial relationship developments. That and it seems like Caden was just fine with the interspecies thing. Never seemed like it was an issue with him that he had to overcome. Feels like a puzzle that is missing pieces.
Hoo boy, pretty sure this story was rated T before. Are we going to see clop scenes in the flashback? Because that M rating must've a purpose.
Glad to see this being updated, good chapter!
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Thanks!
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Mr. Chekov, you seem to have forgotten your firearm. Quite literally, for poor Caden.
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Ha! Yes he is not having a good time of this arcane nonsense. More will be revealed soon. :)
Oh my. Someone is looking to join the Five Miles High Snugglebuddy Club already? Such ambition.
Oooooohhhhh mmmmmmmmmyyyyyyyy!_!
I liked the idea of Redheart being a romantic interest, but the story and especially the relationship is too fast paced. A lot of time skips and missing crucial relationship developments. That and it seems like Caden was just fine with the interspecies thing. Never seemed like it was an issue with him that he had to overcome. Feels like a puzzle that is missing pieces.