Epic! I loved every single bit! Good job!

I support this, and I’ll help as much as possible

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Thanks, ways to possibly help right now is in the Author's Note, by all means, give it a look.

Also, ideas for future chapters would be welcomed too.

Just wondering if you could get a flutter shy image out so it is possible to get a better visual image of what she looks like here.

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Maybe, but all I've found so far is half-naked pictures of her.

So far I like the story pls keep update it

I like the story so far keep it up

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Thanks, if you know anyone else who'd might enjoy this, feel free to tell them.

If you're gonna copy Konosuba, you could at least try and be a bit discreet about it.

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I didn't completely copy Konosuba, cause in Konosuba, Kazuma gets the upper hand on Aqua, while Chris was just playing by Exsistance's control over Fate, also Kazuma didn't get a demon cat or get to keep his smartphone when he was reborn.

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Well, you didn't completely copy, but i'm just saying the similarities are a little too apparent, nothing wrong with taking an idea, but try to differentiate your story a bit more.

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I am, unlike in Konosuba, Chris's allies aren't completely useless or impractical, just a need some strategy to be most effective.

Also, Chris doesn't get a healer that can bring back the dead, so he has to be extra careful.

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That's a good start, i'll look forward to seeing what you do.

I wonder why ppl dislike your story tho..

Did you know that the chapter time is misspelled? I'm pretty sure laugh isn't supposed to be spelled luagh.
Just saw that and thought you should know.
Seems like a good story concept, but I haven't read it yet. Though I'm about to now.

The whole summary made me go oof to the poor guy. He makes Kazuma, the Re: Zero MC and the Smartphone Hero MC seem like they won the lottery.

Well this is an interesting read so far *sips tea* i do hope it continues

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Maybe cause they either don't like HiE, AU, or Anthro stories.

Or they don't like that I'm treating the movie as canon

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Thanks, if you know anyone else who'd might enjoy this, feel free to tell them.

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I tend to be more of a passive observer. *Sips Tea* I make for a terrible guide.

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I've given Fluttershy a picture

I grabbed the final quest notice, it was a dungeon quest, unlike the others which were all on some noble's land so you'd have to hand over everything you find inside, this one wasn't on any owned land so we'd get to keep what we find, for some reason though it had a clip with a jewel in the shape of a 6-pointed pink star attached to it. When I flicked it off everyone seemed a little surprised at me, I walked over to my team and we headed out, they seemed shocked at what I did, so I'll have to ask them later.

So, a quest "claimed" or posted by Twilight? Or one where one or more Elements (the baubles, not the ponies) may be found at the end?

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Nope, Twilight wanted to do it but never had time to, so that jeweled clip was just saying that the quest was being saved for her.

"Yeah, the muttering they're doing proves that much, and yes, I can hear you, my ears aren't focused like yours, I can hear what's around me!" I yelled at the ponies, those guilty immediately looked away.

That is a line I haven’t seen anywhere.

Finally, a proper Isekai without cringy cliches.

We reached the Adventurer's Guild, it didn't look all that special, but the noises inside did. Sounded like something was having sex with a horse while fighting a yak and bull with a cane, I wish I was joking, I also noticed it was connected to the town's bar, blacksmith shop, and the potion brewery.

That’s very creative and gave us a good laugh.

Tempest was shocked for a few seconds before somepony approached us, it was Spike, he was a male pre-teen dragon standing 5'9 with purple scales, green spikes, a pale green underbelly, green eyes, green little 'whiskers' on his cheeks, and a spade-shaped tip on his tail. He had a strong lean build from helping around Ponyville so much, mainly with Twilight and Rarity. He wore a purple vest with a white stripe and the collar popped up, grey gauntlets with no fingers cause of his claws, black bands on his arms, a dark purple jacket around *her* waist, purple pants, and white shoes. He also had a metal shield with a green gem in the center.

You forgot to correct that part.

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Probably because they think it'll turn into one of those anime tropes where a majority of the fics (displaced) where they become a simp.