Dude, to read your fic is PAINFUL ; in the entire chapter you haven't used even a single comma, or colons, or semi-colons, only full stops dude, that is so messed up; there were plenty of places it needed some of those, together with a rewrite of the text to get it correctly; dude, don't write straight from your head, and edit your text or you won't be getting much attention.
My small comment have plenty of commans and punctuation, please do the same.
10289087 Well it doesn't have to be all work for Henry :p Also I'm happy you like it. I'm currently overviewing the draft of the next chapter while attempting to focus to make it more readable for people , using more commas etc.
i wonder why celestia was worryd when she saw the bat? fear or history repeating itself?
Didn't this story used to have more chapters?
SKY DOGGO IS BEST DOGGO!
That is all, PEACE!
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Nah you're thinking of humble prince... or whatever the name is
love the story hop you keep it going.
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Yes sky doggos rule
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Thank you Buddy
Dude, to read your fic is PAINFUL ; in the entire chapter you haven't used even a single comma, or colons, or semi-colons, only full stops dude, that is so messed up; there were plenty of places it needed some of those, together with a rewrite of the text to get it correctly; dude, don't write straight from your head, and edit your text or you won't be getting much attention.
My small comment have plenty of commans and punctuation, please do the same.
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I love this story but I agree. It’s a little annoying to not have comma’s...
Keep up the work as it’s a good story
This was quite enjoyable and very adorable. *Sips Tea* I eagerly await further updates
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Well it doesn't have to be all work for Henry :p
Also I'm happy you like it. I'm currently overviewing the draft of the next chapter while attempting to focus to make it more readable for people , using more commas etc.
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It is very good indeed to hear there is more on the way *Sips Tea* thank you for the update. 😺
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Spoilers but I'd say go theorising :p
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Well yeah ofc I will continue and well don't thank me yet since well you know where chapter 4 left off :p
Can honestly say I’ve never heard of bats being called sky dogs.
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It's a common pet name for bats in circles that tend to them. Because they really are sky doggos and cuddly
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True but It does take some prep work. Barring living on a stereotypical farm or being extremely good at angling a compact mirror.