The intro here was nice and sweet. Looks like they are both a bit embarrassed by the snuggle time. I found it funny that Smoulder was on top of Ocellus.
"Claw, I slept terrible. I hate how small these beds are."
Oh yes, blame the beds. Forget that you slept on someone there aye?
Smoulder getting teased by the captain was kinda funny till the bombshell hit that she knew about Ocellus being a changeling. Made me wonder... if the captain knew, did she not say anything because...? Guess we will never know now...
That was a rough sudden change of course in the story when the ship got attacked though. I didn't expect a huge dog to come knocking and that threw my expectations. Now I can only wonder where this fic is going. It no longer looks like a quick trip to the dragons. Suddenly, they are on the run from someone looking to bring them (or just Ocellus) in. It sounds like we might have Chrysalis behind something bad. The transformation into a mismatched creature made me think of Animorphs and some of the weird stuff in there. Chrysalis is a crazy geneticist? You kinda nailed that one. For sure had some weird vibes going on and it makes the old queen of the changlings feel even more dangerous to have been playing so ruthlessly with the creation of life.
I enjoyed the Thorax and Embers interactions. Maybe she should take him out and about in the dragon lands. He could help with knocking dragons into line, even if just by being a supportive mate. I wonder if he is stil going to be hanging around by the time the two younger ones show up. I hope they get to run into the older couple.
Well that's rather good to see. And yeah, I tried to put the big twist in between the cute stuff. Cause I like writing these two- even if I'm mainly writing Ocellus as Fluttershy by way of Twilight with her feel. Smolder would be the Dash archetype.
I definitely had ideas for the captain. Still do. Now how might that be possible. With the seeming loss of her character, it could be a backstory thing. Could be another thing since I never said her soul was destroyed. Eaten, probably, not annihilated. And we still haven't seen the rest of the dragons yet since we have two seemingly separate stories for now- Ember and Thorax, and Smolder and Ocellus. I have stuff planned.
A lot of this story is based in little hints I sprinkled around in my big story. Chrysalis doing weird stuff? Yeah. This time we see it outright. I seemingly write her like a horror villain. Cause this time its fully important. And well the older pair did expect Ocellus and Smolder to show up. It is a Gathering of Dragons. So what happens when they don't. They will, at some point meet up.
The intro here was nice and sweet.
Looks like they are both a bit embarrassed by the snuggle time. I found it funny that Smoulder was on top of Ocellus.
Oh yes, blame the beds. Forget that you slept on someone there aye?
Smoulder getting teased by the captain was kinda funny till the bombshell hit that she knew about Ocellus being a changeling. Made me wonder... if the captain knew, did she not say anything because...?
Guess we will never know now...
That was a rough sudden change of course in the story when the ship got attacked though. I didn't expect a huge dog to come knocking and that threw my expectations. Now I can only wonder where this fic is going. It no longer looks like a quick trip to the dragons. Suddenly, they are on the run from someone looking to bring them (or just Ocellus) in. It sounds like we might have Chrysalis behind something bad.
The transformation into a mismatched creature made me think of Animorphs and some of the weird stuff in there.
Chrysalis is a crazy geneticist? You kinda nailed that one. For sure had some weird vibes going on and it makes the old queen of the changlings feel even more dangerous to have been playing so ruthlessly with the creation of life.
I enjoyed the Thorax and Embers interactions. Maybe she should take him out and about in the dragon lands. He could help with knocking dragons into line, even if just by being a supportive mate. I wonder if he is stil going to be hanging around by the time the two younger ones show up. I hope they get to run into the older couple.
Well that's rather good to see. And yeah, I tried to put the big twist in between the cute stuff. Cause I like writing these two- even if I'm mainly writing Ocellus as Fluttershy by way of Twilight with her feel. Smolder would be the Dash archetype.
I definitely had ideas for the captain. Still do. Now how might that be possible. With the seeming loss of her character, it could be a backstory thing. Could be another thing since I never said her soul was destroyed. Eaten, probably, not annihilated. And we still haven't seen the rest of the dragons yet since we have two seemingly separate stories for now- Ember and Thorax, and Smolder and Ocellus. I have stuff planned.
A lot of this story is based in little hints I sprinkled around in my big story. Chrysalis doing weird stuff? Yeah. This time we see it outright. I seemingly write her like a horror villain. Cause this time its fully important. And well the older pair did expect Ocellus and Smolder to show up. It is a Gathering of Dragons. So what happens when they don't. They will, at some point meet up.