Twilight gives herself a penis with magic as an experiment, but finds she can't actually get rid of it. Suddenly, she's confronted with new obstacles in her self image, as well as new opportunities in her sex life.
Every Tuesday evening, the Carousel Boutique closed an hour early. It had been the case for as long as most ponies could remember. To those curious and daring enough to ask her why, Rarity had answered that she needed the time to do her accounting. This was a satisfactory answer to most ponies. Nopony was allowed in the Boutique on these evenings, not even Sweetie Belle.
ok opening paragraph, i believe you but you're also highly suspicious
Pinkie looked around innocently. “Hey, I don’t see any financial records back here!”
hmm wonder why
“Oh, do be quiet, you.” Rarity pulled Pinkie closer and pressed their mouths together. Pinkie closed her eyes and wrapped her arms around Rarity’s back, holding her close as their tongues entwined.
awwwwwwwwwwww
“Hmm, maybe I could give you a little taste of what’s to come?” Pinkie tried to match Rarity’s seductive look, but it was hard when she wanted to bounce up and down excitedly. “If my mistress would like that?”
oh pinkie she's great
“Good girl.” Rarity opened the door and walked out into the showroom. “Terribly sorry about that! Now, where were we.”
that guy is being terribly inconvenient
“Pinkie,” Twilight breathed, “I don’t know if we should…”
dangit brain
“Ah, the famous ‘friend’.”
especially when it's pinkie like that really doesn't narrow it down
regular people doing sex stuff and balancing their inter-personal relationships while they're at it
yeah, i think it went well and i enjoy it
but I think it's more endearing if they're just two friends who come together for a mutual interest without being experts at it
agreed, they're cute and spending time together in fun ways and that's good
By celestia that was a great chapter never thought of that pairing it is amazing though twi not hanging around her friends and her feelings in the last chapter worry me I hope our resident purple smart is ok
10417395 We'll be checking back into Twi's side of things next chapter. She's got a ways to go before she's settled her issues (this story is aiming for somewhere in the 70-100k word range) but she might catch a break soon And I'm glad you liked the chapter! I've always loved Raripie for this sort of thing, I see both of them as the kinds of people/ponies who can just come together for some fun mutual interests without making it into a big thing.
10417585 Lol I don't think Twilight wants to ask anyone for advice at this moment. She seems like she'd rather everyone just pretend it wasn't even there hahaha
This is far from the kind of story I like to read, but the chance for that sweet, sweet trans representation called to me. Admittedly - and no offense - there were a lot of (lewd) bits I wouldn't get any enjoyment in reading, so I skimmed them to focus on dialogue and characterization. I'm really glad I binged this today, though. Very few stories touch on dysphoria so explicitly.
10498263 Indeed, I'm surprised to see you reading this one. I don't blame you for skimming the lewd bits lol, rather I take it as high praise that you enjoyed the story in spite of them. I perpetually go back and forth on how I feel about this story, but comments like this make me wanna push myself to do the next chapter
10498376 I mean, I personally feel like a story should be able to be enjoyed with or without graphic content (unless it is truly needed for the story to proceed). I think that this story actually utilizes the bits I did go through to really explain dysphoria in a really accessible trans perspective. As an ace trans person, comprehending bottom dysphoria is something that just doesn't click with me. This story helped put that in understandable situations.
Is this a fetish story?
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Nah, it's pretty vanilla really. Plus it's more story than sex anyway.
ok opening paragraph, i believe you but you're also highly suspicious
hmm
wonder why
awwwwwwwwwwww
oh pinkie
she's great
that guy is being terribly inconvenient
dangit brain
especially when it's pinkie
like
that really doesn't narrow it down
yeah, i think it went well and i enjoy it
agreed, they're cute and spending time together in fun ways and that's good
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter This chapter really helped me feel a lot closer to this story, and I'm looking forward to writing more
By celestia that was a great chapter never thought of that pairing it is amazing though twi not hanging around her friends and her feelings in the last chapter worry me I hope our resident purple smart is ok
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We'll be checking back into Twi's side of things next chapter. She's got a ways to go before she's settled her issues (this story is aiming for somewhere in the 70-100k word range) but she might catch a break soon And I'm glad you liked the chapter! I've always loved Raripie for this sort of thing, I see both of them as the kinds of people/ponies who can just come together for some fun mutual interests without making it into a big thing.
Hmm... maybe she should ask her brother for advice? He had experience after all.
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Lol I don't think Twilight wants to ask anyone for advice at this moment. She seems like she'd rather everyone just pretend it wasn't even there hahaha
This is far from the kind of story I like to read, but the chance for that sweet, sweet trans representation called to me. Admittedly - and no offense - there were a lot of (lewd) bits I wouldn't get any enjoyment in reading, so I skimmed them to focus on dialogue and characterization. I'm really glad I binged this today, though. Very few stories touch on dysphoria so explicitly.
Haha geddit?10498263
Indeed, I'm surprised to see you reading this one. I don't blame you for skimming the lewd bits lol, rather I take it as high praise that you enjoyed the story in spite of them. I perpetually go back and forth on how I feel about this story, but comments like this make me wanna push myself to do the next chapter
10498376
I mean, I personally feel like a story should be able to be enjoyed with or without graphic content (unless it is truly needed for the story to proceed). I think that this story actually utilizes the bits I did go through to really explain dysphoria in a really accessible trans perspective. As an ace trans person, comprehending bottom dysphoria is something that just doesn't click with me. This story helped put that in understandable situations.
Hey Krickis
I just realized that this was the first story I saved from your collection of stories.
I legit fricking forgot that it was by you all along
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Lure 'em in with the smut, make 'em stay for the drama
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I swear you’re the most savage person I’ve ever met
I respect that XD