Alright, alright. I'll keep an eye on this story, let's see where it goes, huh?

Good start to the story, I found no grammar mistakes. So ya, keeping a eye on this one.

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I agree as well. I hooe to see more of your story. Keep going and good luck! (Also take your time and don't rush to keep making chapters. We can be a patient bunch! lol)

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Bless the both of ya. Glad you enjoyed and hope to keep you further entertained. And good to know my grammar didn't die on me lol.

Principle rather than principal used a few times.

Not sure why her grey skin would be considered particularly odd, given EQ people come in all colors.

Overall, an interesting start. Will be looking for updates.

Admittedly it's a little difficult to tell you're trying to establish an AU of EqG. The mishmash of pony character tags with the EqG ones look more like a mixed-message sign to a reader like me. I'd have taken a little more time to work that in to this chapter as a way to set up the atmosphere, or perhaps stuck it in the description to deter confusion.