10068629 He'll get out of this specific situation by the next chapter. Now, will the other situations be worse? That's an entirely different question. :)
Damn only discovered 30 minutes ago and this is hot stuffm been wanting to have a good HiE with Sex-Qestria, and even better with compulsions spell on his mind, this is just perfect. Can't wait to see what happen next and if you are in need for art let me know I will try to hammer out a good deal for you. Keep it up
10068635 I meant his overall situation of becoming this mare's demented sex toy or whatever plans that the author or whoever commissioned this has for him. I don't want to root for someone whose going to die or lose who they were by the end of the story.
I love this it might be my second favorite smut piece ever, but I also feel like it would be more interesting if the Main character had some ways to fight back.
Yes this was very good. You're incredibly creative in terms of bondage and torment scenarios, I'm kinda jealous.
Criticism first, I'm not sure I'm entirely sold on the first person perspective. I enjoy it a ton, and the opportunities it's presenting from a narrative scope. Joel is really really fun to listen to. But when you're going for nuts levels of orgasm denial and spirit breaking, I'm not sure his tone really shifts enough to capture that desperation - which might make things a rougher read, so it's hard to balance, admittedly.
Everything else, though, yessssssss. Sable is so wonderful and generous, being such a helpful teacher here. It's taking a lot of time and effort, but Joel will learn his lesson, and be such a needy happy whore once he's learned a real set of morals and respect for his betters. <3
I especially appreciated the constant reminder of his own arousal from his scent and the feel of his cock, helpless and unable to resist his body's rightful urges. The parts with other ponies were really fun too, taking full advantage of Sable's kind offering without any questions to who or why the poor stallion was available to them.
I'm remembering one of Joel's first thoughts was about a Cindy - personally, I'm hoping for a tearful reunion somewhen down the line, where she can find out how wonderfully Joel has grown in the time he's been missing and they can bond over his experiences!
I find it amusing that the author opted to use an image of my OC for the cover art. Not that it's a problem or anything, Just kinda confused how it relates to the story n stuff. xD
might give the story a read just because of this. Depends on if I can muster the patience n stuff to actually sit down and actually read it.
10070687 Tell me if it starts to bother you, I don't want to make you uncomfortable with it. I liked the look of the OC in that artwork and in the next chapter the scenario there happens pretty much exactly as shown.
any point hoping for any kind of way he can escape this situation or is he in all sense of the word screwed?
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He'll get out of this specific situation by the next chapter. Now, will the other situations be worse? That's an entirely different question. :)
Damn only discovered 30 minutes ago and this is hot stuffm been wanting to have a good HiE with Sex-Qestria, and even better with compulsions spell on his mind, this is just perfect. Can't wait to see what happen next and if you are in need for art let me know I will try to hammer out a good deal for you. Keep it up
Wow, alright, this one's pretty hot~![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
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I meant his overall situation of becoming this mare's demented sex toy or whatever plans that the author or whoever commissioned this has for him. I don't want to root for someone whose going to die or lose who they were by the end of the story.
I love this it might be my second favorite smut piece ever, but I also feel like it would be more interesting if the Main character had some ways to fight back.
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The actual end point is up in the air. I will say that it gets worse before it gets better.
Talk about cruel and unusual... I love it!
Yes this was very good. You're incredibly creative in terms of bondage and torment scenarios, I'm kinda jealous.
Criticism first, I'm not sure I'm entirely sold on the first person perspective. I enjoy it a ton, and the opportunities it's presenting from a narrative scope. Joel is really really fun to listen to. But when you're going for nuts levels of orgasm denial and spirit breaking, I'm not sure his tone really shifts enough to capture that desperation - which might make things a rougher read, so it's hard to balance, admittedly.
Everything else, though, yessssssss. Sable is so wonderful and generous, being such a helpful teacher here. It's taking a lot of time and effort, but Joel will learn his lesson, and be such a needy happy whore once he's learned a real set of morals and respect for his betters. <3
I especially appreciated the constant reminder of his own arousal from his scent and the feel of his cock, helpless and unable to resist his body's rightful urges. The parts with other ponies were really fun too, taking full advantage of Sable's kind offering without any questions to who or why the poor stallion was available to them.
I'm remembering one of Joel's first thoughts was about a Cindy - personally, I'm hoping for a tearful reunion somewhen down the line, where she can find out how wonderfully Joel has grown in the time he's been missing and they can bond over his experiences!
10070363![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
Sable ought to be the real Element of Generosity, shouldn't she?
I find it amusing that the author opted to use an image of my OC for the cover art. Not that it's a problem or anything, Just kinda confused how it relates to the story n stuff. xD
might give the story a read just because of this. Depends on if I can muster the patience n stuff to actually sit down and actually read it.
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Tell me if it starts to bother you, I don't want to make you uncomfortable with it. I liked the look of the OC in that artwork and in the next chapter the scenario there happens pretty much exactly as shown.