A spartan aboard a civilian transport to the Cygnus System is stranded when a malfunction occurs. Half his ship is found by the UNSC, the other half, by the Royal Guard.
I wasn't expecting to see a new chapter so this is Awesome. Love to see your still working on it.
I can understand how he feels alone, although the sudden intro of both more UNSC and the Covies is a sudden plot point, but as long as you make it sound good and it flows. You will do great
Really happy to see this isn't dead, and this was a good chapter. I also agree with Silver Echo, this Story is one of the few halo stories I know that actually does it right, spartan part at least so please keep up the good work but please don't push yourself bud
10498566 My stories never really die, they're just missing in action!
10497831 She was in the end of a battle and saw two species destroying each other, in the end she saw the Spartan murder an enemy who was unarmed and clearly had lost, that was what made her draw the conclusion he must have been in the wrong.
But she was clearly mistaken, as the rest of us know.
I wasn't expecting to see a new chapter so this is Awesome. Love to see your still working on it.
I can understand how he feels alone, although the sudden intro of both more UNSC and the Covies is a sudden plot point, but as long as you make it sound good and it flows. You will do great
Really happy to see this isn't dead, and this was a good chapter. I also agree with Silver Echo, this Story is one of the few halo stories I know that actually does it right, spartan part at least so please keep up the good work but please don't push yourself bud
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I promise, it will integrate well! I’m working on the part 2 as time allows!
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But wasn't she in the battle? Couldn't she see the damage?
Holy shit, its alive
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My stories never really die, they're just missing in action!
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She was in the end of a battle and saw two species destroying each other, in the end she saw the Spartan murder an enemy who was unarmed and clearly had lost, that was what made her draw the conclusion he must have been in the wrong.
But she was clearly mistaken, as the rest of us know.
AWESOME… also update?
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Working on it!