Man, this was.... strange to read. I didn't realize it was a dream until close to the end, and thought it was a really dark, gorey AU. As it is, it's just dark and gorey. I am still curious where this might go, especially since dream-Sunset is markedly different from the real Sunset, since this one seems basically irredeemable, which is the opposite of who Sunset becomes. I did see that the first chapter is a bit different, so will keep my eye out.
“Go ahead,” was the only response, coming gently from the demon princess behind her. Her words were grotesque, yet mesmerizing all the same. “You know you can’t resist.”
Man, this was.... strange to read. I didn't realize it was a dream until close to the end, and thought it was a really dark, gorey AU. As it is, it's just dark and gorey.
I am still curious where this might go, especially since dream-Sunset is markedly different from the real Sunset, since this one seems basically irredeemable, which is the opposite of who Sunset becomes. I did see that the first chapter is a bit different, so will keep my eye out.
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Thanks for giving it a chance. I promise there's a point to the dark tone, and it'll be made clear soon.
Wait, did that really happen?
This is me now.