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Sir Starshine

People say the earth is flat like a quarter. I'm wondering what kind of vending machine takes a whole planet for a snack.

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Shortmane
Shortmane #1 · Jan 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 01: Out of Control ·
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Man, this was.... strange to read. I didn't realize it was a dream until close to the end, and thought it was a really dark, gorey AU. As it is, it's just dark and gorey.
I am still curious where this might go, especially since dream-Sunset is markedly different from the real Sunset, since this one seems basically irredeemable, which is the opposite of who Sunset becomes. I did see that the first chapter is a bit different, so will keep my eye out.

Sir Starshine
Sir Starshine #2 · Jan 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 01: Out of Control ·
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10020446
Thanks for giving it a chance. I promise there's a point to the dark tone, and it'll be made clear soon.

ghisl44
ghisl44 #3 · Jan 6th, 2020 · · · Chapter 02: System Shock ·
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Great chapter. I hope to see more of this story soon.

ghisl44
ghisl44 #4 · Jan 7th, 2020 · · · Chapter 03: Mistrust ·
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I didn't except the main character to react like this but I guess he had a good reason... Hope to see more soon and to discover what Sunset did to him.

diablo4000
diablo4000 #6 · Jan 20th, 2020 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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Will we see anything on Celestia and her dealing with being a utter Failure?

Sir Starshine
Sir Starshine #7 · Jan 20th, 2020 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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10042705
Not in this one, sorry. But I can work on a short side story to address that.

toshibafox
toshibafox #9 · Jan 20th, 2020 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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I'm liking this, can't wait to see how she fucked up and how she's going to un-fuck her situation

PixelatedPerson
PixelatedPerson #10 · Jul 26th, 2020 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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Excellent job so far. really like how its going cant wait to see more.

Pete100
Pete100 #11 · May 3rd, 2021 · · · Chapter 01: Out of Control ·
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Wait, did that really happen?

Pete100
Pete100 #12 · May 3rd, 2021 · · · Chapter 02: System Shock ·
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I couldn’t help wondering why. It started out with her trying to avoid joining anyone all together, and they would leave her to it. But before long, they started catching her attention and inviting her to join them. Sure, they were visibly uncomfortable, but it was their choice. Now, she could just waltz right up and join them out of the blue. What right did she have to call them her friends? What right did she have to have friends? Why did they make such an effort to make her feel included, after all she had done?!

Honestly, as long as she doesn’t bother me I wouldn’t care.

“Hey, Beef Stew!” I heard a student call out. I winced. “What’s the matter, breaking up with your girlfriend?” There was laughter all around the cafeteria.

I would have told them to f*ck off.

Pete100
Pete100 #13 · May 3rd, 2021 · · · Chapter 03: Mistrust ·
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On the chalkboard were three diagrams of triangles, each with various lined and bowed arrows pointing between different portions, the definitions of each of the three terms, and at the right end of the board, a large set of abbreviations written in three lines: “SOH, CAH, TOA.”

Oh god. I remember that.

“That’s right,” he responded with an unfittingly gleeful tone. “Only half of the assignment. And you know what that means, right? It means--” his expression pulled an immediate 180. “-- only half the credit!” He slammed the paper on the desk. “I don’t know what the problem is, Buster Brown, but if you want to pass this class,” he pointed at me with his opposite hand, “you’d better get your rear in gear and focus! ” He placed his hands together and paced by me towards the front corner. “I will not have one of my students flagrantly disregarding their work.” He stopped and turned his head back to me. “We have standards at this school, a reputation to maintain, and we strive to abide by them both. And you? ” He turned his body as well to face me fully. “ You’re not abiding. I don’t believe you’re even trying!” He rushed up to me, grabbing the paper, and scanning it quickly, then began flailing wildly to emphasize his point. “Honestly, even only doing half the work, you’ve still gotten several of these wrong! What happened? You started this year out so well, you hardly ever even got a question wrong, let alone turned in assignments unfinished. And now this?” He slapped my paper with the opposite hand. “ This is just sloppy! ”

I hate this teacher, already.

He gave me a quizzical look. “You have?” He blinked for a second. “Then I’m sure you know the stakes of your predicament, and the consequences of failing! Oh, sure, you’ll be held back a year, reprimanded perhaps, but your grades, your behavior,” he suddenly pointed to himself with both hands, “they will also reflect on us! And I will not have my reputation tarnished by some hooligan who thinks he’s above doing his schoolwork.” He walked back to the other side of his desk, returning my paper to the drawer. “Now, go on to your next class, but remember: you will begin turning in completed assignments from now on, is that clear?”

So it’s about them?

“No! That’s not what--” I cut her words short and I jumped towards her and wrapped my hands around her neck. Her friends reacted immediately, all jumping to separate us.

Damn.

Pete100
Pete100 #14 · May 3rd, 2021 · · · Chapter 04: Curiosity ·
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Finally, we get to see what happened.

Pete100
Pete100 #15 · May 3rd, 2021 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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Is this going to continue?

Sir Starshine
Sir Starshine #16 · May 4th, 2021 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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10800220
Yeah, I’ve just been dealing with some stuff since then and am having a hard time returning

Pete100
Pete100 #18 · Mar 7th, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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10042705
You mean failure as a principal?

Pete100
Pete100 #20 · May 6th, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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10043008
Honestly, I don’t think she can.

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #21 · Jun 13th, 2022 · · · Chapter 01: Out of Control ·
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“Go ahead,” was the only response, coming gently from the demon princess behind her. Her words were grotesque, yet mesmerizing all the same. “You know you can’t resist.”

This is me now.

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #22 · Jun 14th, 2022 · · · Chapter 02: System Shock ·
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I finally found something and someone who relates to me.

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #23 · Jun 14th, 2022 · · · Chapter 03: Mistrust ·
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“Tell me, what do you see here?”

An F Bomb

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #24 · Jun 14th, 2022 · · · Chapter 03: Mistrust ·
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I've actually wanted to hurt those sorry bitches for years.

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #28 · Jun 16th, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11273043
'Strue he took elements from "The Fall of Sunset Shimmer" and used them in Sunset's Trial.

Pete100
Pete100 #36 · Jun 18th, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11274990
I don’t think I’ve seen it.

Sir Starshine
Sir Starshine #37 · Jun 18th, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11274990
Are you talking about the shorts? Gift exchange, trying to fake a snow day, etc?

Pete100
Pete100 #39 · Jul 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11275262
11275889
I don’t remember any betrayal in that.

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #40 · Jul 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11288064
You won't understand it when I say "THEY betrayed ME so I hate THEM"

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #42 · Jul 2nd, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11288782
See what I did?

It points toward, "YOU'RE not old enough for this movie and WE'RE not taking YOU."

Hoping for death
Hoping for death #44 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11288891
No, that's a quote from the same show as "If you go in me, you die!"

Pete100
Pete100 #45 · Jul 3rd, 2022 · · · Chapter 05: Technical Advisory ·
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11288993
Oh ok. So how did it betray you?

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