Light killer

Dang, as Dark as Sombra is I have to give him respect for some standards

Indigo is cruising for a bruising if she doesn't back off. I'm pretty sure that Sunset's getting savvy to what the students of CPA have been doing to her new friend, and I'm also sure that she's not going to let it keep happening.

Glad things in WB-Sunny's life are going well. New ride, dates with fun incarnate, school not being a bunch of bastards. Hope she enjoys the peace before the next storm rises.

Sombra, you're an evil bastard, but I love that you're at least honorable.

Hey, in this chapter it makes it seem like Sunset and Cloud Kicker have been on the same fencing team for a while now. However, in the previous story, in Case File 5-3 (Ishtar): Let's Talk Sunset didn't know who Cloud was, and it was pretty concrete in that fact.

“Cloud?” Sunset looked at the girl who spoke up. “Are you Cloud Kicker?”

Cloud nodded her head wearily. “I am…why?”

Just thought I would point out that continuity issue.

}}} I would not recommend any kind of “examination” being conducted on me. {{{

Also this isn't in red.

...six members of the Fencing Club ... her flail pointed at Sunset.

The word you want here is 'foil'.

A flail is a bludgeoning head attached to a handle by a length of chain.

“……Excuse me?”

Oh, so both Sunset have a Bike.

Is it bad if i wonder wether or not Pinkie or later Sci-Twi (once she had gotten over her issues) would want a threesome with the two Sunset ?

Sunset narrowed her gaze as she assumed the same stance, steadying her breath as readied to attack. Underneath the faceguard, her opponent, Cloud Kicker, did the same, both holding their positions and looking for the slightest hint of movement. Cloud saw a slight twitch of Sunset’s hand and lunged forward with her flail.

Fencing, and Cloud do it too ? Nice.

Cloud chuckled a little. “We’re not really ‘going out’. We’re just friends with benefits.”

😏

Nice

“Let’s just take some time to look this over, explore different avenues and theories as to why she looks and sounds like you. As the great detective used to say, ‘If you eliminate everything that is logical, whatever is left – no matter how improbable – must be the truth’.”

Well shit.

The tendrils began to move into the room, making the men practically wet themselves. “Just take some solace in the fact that I don’t hurt women and kids. Part of my code, unlike some of you…”

Uh.

I kinda want to see (Equestria) Sunset fight him, it would be nice if he could be useful for Sunset later on.