Not bad. You want to be careful with some of your wording when it comes to sex though. Don't thinks it's possible for a Spike this size to have his dicks reach Celestia's gullet. And move details on Spike's current height would be great.
My guess, from reading that his face/head is at a perfect height with Celestia's flank, means he went though a grown spurt and probably stands eye to eye, or maybe a few inches taller with Luna (Spike is bipedal/Luna is four legged).
Good start, all the same. Interested in seeing how far this goes.
9785844 Thanks! Yeah, description is something I've always been struggling to improve. 9785914 Yeah, wondered if the pic was too much, guess now I know! 9786035 Thank you! I'll try to describe that better in the future; Spike is pretty much eye-level with Celestia's plot. 9786162 No problem. Not used to writing Celestia (Only really used her human counterpart much in another story( but I hope I did okay!
Hmm, it’s a good start. I think you could have given more details, but what you did have there was nice.
Not bad. You want to be careful with some of your wording when it comes to sex though. Don't thinks it's possible for a Spike this size to have his dicks reach Celestia's gullet. And move details on Spike's current height would be great.
My guess, from reading that his face/head is at a perfect height with Celestia's flank, means he went though a grown spurt and probably stands eye to eye, or maybe a few inches taller with Luna (Spike is bipedal/Luna is four legged).
Good start, all the same. Interested in seeing how far this goes.
Thanks for this
9785844
Thanks! Yeah, description is something I've always been struggling to improve.
9785914
Yeah, wondered if the pic was too much, guess now I know!
9786035
Thank you! I'll try to describe that better in the future; Spike is pretty much eye-level with Celestia's plot.
9786162
No problem. Not used to writing Celestia (Only really used her human counterpart much in another story( but I hope I did okay!
9786406
Lucky bastard! Eye to plot all his young life. Now he gets a taste of the best one!
9786421
Exactly! Not sure how Spike controls himself!