................At least it's better than..........Cupcakes..
Well, at least Dash didn't...(Puts on sunglasses)...Taste the Rainbow. YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
2008772 I'm sorry and no offence to the writer but I think cupcakes is better written and more gripping in its horror. Still brilliant fic, can't wait to read the next parts
................At least it's better than..........Cupcakes..
Well, at least Dash didn't...(Puts on sunglasses)...Taste the Rainbow. YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
Hahaha! I can picture her corpse just lying there with broken bones coming out of her!
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Hrm, not the best chapter? Critiques are always welcome, if not to help me write better in the future!
No, It's a interesting chapter! I meant that it's better than cupcakes (the fic, not the food).
am i crying damn it man what have you done to me
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I'm sorry and no offence to the writer but I think cupcakes is better written and more gripping in its horror.
Still brilliant fic, can't wait to read the next parts