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...ok, we're 20k word in into this story and we still have zero idea what's going on and it's getting very frustrating. Crimson is a dolt and Dahlia is a bitch and for the life of me I cannot wrap my head around what the fascination this fandom has with being a pet/slave of a pony.
Please continue
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I agree
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If you have zero idea as to what is going on you either haven't been paying attention, or lack imagination. Don't lump all of us readers into "we". There have been many hints and references as to possible plot devices scattered throughout the story so far- mainly the relics themselves, but also a particular background conversation. If the YHAY fandom hasn't been your cup of tea thus far, then I wonder why you choose to keep reading similar works and post non-constructive criticism. There are many other types of stories on the site for you to browse without trolling authors of works whose premise you find distasteful.
I can’t stand when the protagonist are so Helpless all the time. I don’t know where the fascination of being submissive and controlled comes from but that shit is not for me. I really don’t want to attack the writer but if this doesn’t do a 180 I think I’m dropping it.
Legal theft - what a charm ...
Not detained until the presentation of documents, but confiscated .. so much room for corruption and theft ...
How many more laws like this are out there?
They didn't even ask for her name or documents.. only documents for her property... what a charm ...
*p.s. How to make the reader hate something (this version of Equestria) - add some very bad things to the good ones without pushing them too hard.
**p.s. There is no subject of slavery, since otherwise it will be necessary to recognize as such the possession-breeding-hunting of all animals.
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Crazy it's somehow the 3rd story I saw where humans exist in fim but are basically wild animals, cool and interesting trope that sadly doesn't get used at all when stories these days really need some spice, good story btw I'm ignoring the rest of the comments cause most people would literally just go along for the ride because of how bat shit crazy or hmmm let's see where this goes energy.
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Celestia is still young and i think a lot of ponies realize that and take advantage of that