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Please don't take this the wrong way, but, uh, why can't you just write the story so that it's double spaced from the start?
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So I formatted my Microsoft Word so that it has custom presets. This unfortunate happening is due to writing endlessly for college. I started typing the first few chapters with this not in mind, uploaded the chapters, and then realized I put myself into a hole.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
... not going to lie my dudes but this chapter was literally retarded, and I have no idea what it's taking about.
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everything was easy to understand for me. maybe the chapter isn't what's retarded?
so far I've enjoyed the story
That being said, this is a small peeve that a lot of authors tend to make I've noticed.. It's Sapience not Sentience in the context that your explaining..
to use a bit from the start Animals would fall under Sentience while Rulers as you put it, would fall under Sapience
in this paragraph Sentience would actually be the incorrect term to use past perhaps the beginning of the paragraph as it would be Sapient beings that form those communities and rule over one another
like I said just a small peeve but I like to address it when I see it
anyway keep up the good work otherwise as I'll be reading this one over the next couple days as it's not often you get decent writing and some pics with the long fic stories