Humans have always been able to travel outside of their bodies, but they managed to learn how to control it. They use this power to not only explore their universe but others as well, but going to a different universe as a soul has a great risk.
9667842 So, are you okay with the rating switching? Also, what is your opinion on what is going to happen with Long Shot? Because somepony has to notify him for his termination, and that job usually falls to the commanding officer.
i think longshot would fit good for a short ore even long term antagonist character. i expect him to flipp out and having rai on the sideline wont help his tempertandrum then xD he had it coming tho.
9668930 He'll be around for a minute, though he might be just a little hesitant later on with what's about to happen or it might just fuel him even more.
i love it how and where this story is going, keep it up :)
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So, are you okay with the rating switching? Also, what is your opinion on what is going to happen with Long Shot? Because somepony has to notify him for his termination, and that job usually falls to the commanding officer.
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the rating is up to you, im ok with that.
i think longshot would fit good for a short ore even long term antagonist character.
i expect him to flipp out and having rai on the sideline wont help his tempertandrum then xD
he had it coming tho.
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He'll be around for a minute, though he might be just a little hesitant later on with what's about to happen or it might just fuel him even more.