Humans have always been able to travel outside of their bodies, but they managed to learn how to control it. They use this power to not only explore their universe but others as well, but going to a different universe as a soul has a great risk.
9646910 Had this idea for a little while but it took me a long time to figure out how I wanted to present it. Thanks for being the first comment by the way!
I’m surprised this got approved since I thought ponies had to be in the initial upload also i’m Waiting for the Chevok’s Gun that is the forgotten introduced in Chapter 1
9646957 I don't think you need them in the first chapter or anything, as long as it's setting things up. As for the memorial for the forgotten, there may be just a little more too it but I ain't gonna share what that is right now.
Edit: Don't quote me on that though, but otherwise if it was a requirement then it would make it much harder for some stories to get started. But these first few chapters are just trying to do some world building and all that.
9646918 i just finished reading the chapters and i like it. setting up a future for earth like this and for ones a plausible way how humans and pony's meet. lucid dreaming genies ! :D
there's so much potential for back and forth interaction and bringing even new/more characters into equestria
hope we don't have to wait too long to see the reaction of the pony's to a human ghost xD
9647041 It's coming very soon, after orientation they get assigned to a squad. Depending on when the last time they traveled will depend on when the person gets to go on their first mission.
9646968 Yeah I just heard once that I’d say chapter 4 has ponies then you’re suppose to post or at least upload all four chapters to the site I guess it’s to ensure that a pony fiction website actually has pony fiction
9647132 Well, looked over the rules of the site and didn't find anything that suggests you have to have them in the story early. But the upcoming chapter should start things off, so hopefully, it'll be all good either way.
very interesting concept/backstory
9646910
Had this idea for a little while but it took me a long time to figure out how I wanted to present it. Thanks for being the first comment by the way!
I’m surprised this got approved since I thought ponies had to be in the initial upload also i’m Waiting for the Chevok’s Gun that is the forgotten introduced in Chapter 1
9646957
I don't think you need them in the first chapter or anything, as long as it's setting things up. As for the memorial for the forgotten, there may be just a little more too it but I ain't gonna share what that is right now.
Edit: Don't quote me on that though, but otherwise if it was a requirement then it would make it much harder for some stories to get started. But these first few chapters are just trying to do some world building and all that.
9646918
i just finished reading the chapters and i like it. setting up a future for earth like this and for ones a plausible way how humans and pony's meet.
lucid dreaming genies ! :D
there's so much potential for back and forth interaction and bringing even new/more characters into equestria
hope we don't have to wait too long to see the reaction of the pony's to a human ghost xD
9647041
It's coming very soon, after orientation they get assigned to a squad. Depending on when the last time they traveled will depend on when the person gets to go on their first mission.
9646968
Yeah I just heard once that I’d say chapter 4 has ponies then you’re suppose to post or at least upload all four chapters to the site I guess it’s to ensure that a pony fiction website actually has pony fiction
9647132
Well, looked over the rules of the site and didn't find anything that suggests you have to have them in the story early. But the upcoming chapter should start things off, so hopefully, it'll be all good either way.