Equestria has known peace for many decades thanks to the efforts Commander Twilight and the EDF, but now The Commander is missing and a new threat has descended on Equestria
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their biggest error. attacking the mightiest faction on the world allowing its allies time to rally their forces.
Well, for now and get some more reinforcements and bring in heavier firepower for the invasion.
As we see equestria celebrate, little do they know that something was watching them, and reporting back to command, for this war would not be like the others, they’ll unleash there full might on equestria and those that support it.
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True, but the invaders equipment was probably a scouting party to test their defenses. And now that they are on the retreat, they’ll bro by reinforcements and their full firepower to bear on the nations of the world
11490311
maybe not. Twilight trued to show what the invaders were goign to do. while she failed in her attempt. all they need to do is show the footage of the attack and the invaders have to anseer qustions
11490312
That is fair, but it could be an entirely different fleet not the one that failed, you know different tactics and stuff
11490311
Just going to clarify as it was years ago I wrote it.
The thing that crashed into the desert was an advanced probe meant to find and assess planets and there people.
In other words, it was the scouting party and the main force dispatched was deemed all that was needed to handle the primitives and it would have been even with the other nations showing up. The real major deciding factor here was the dragons as nothing on Equees could touch those ships save them so without the dragons those ships just burn the armies of the other nations without anyone being able to scratch them.
9 times out of 10 superior technology wins even when vastly outnumbered.
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True, but still maybe they should have kept some weapons that can actually pierces the scales of a dragon.
This is a bit odd, how can this be a sequel and consistently updated, when the previous story isn't finished yet, and hasn't been updated in nearly 6 years? Just seems odd to me.
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Because do to a foolish decision made the previous story has to be rewritten from the beginning and I haven't figured out how to go about that entirely resulting in massive writers block for it while I wasn't blocked for this and sitting idle bothered me.
So made the decision to write this as it's not effected by the events of the previous story.
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Then, in that case if it's not affected by the events of the previous story, how can it be considered a sequel then? Would it not make more sense to have this as its own standalone thing? Or at the very least say as much in the story description, as to help others avoid confusion, such as I faced?
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Because it is a sequel to the events of the previous stories even if not directly effected and will effect the stories that follow.
It's a main part of the series just not following the characters from previous stories so is a sequel rather then a stand alone fic just since the characters from the previous story barely make an appearance what happened to then doesn't play a major part but things like the technological advancement that has been built up over the series does play a part.
Plus as I said the events of this fic effect all planned sequels directly.
The title was chose to mark it as different from the rest of the main series which follow a format of "the Soldier and [BLANK]" where this doesn't follow Commander Twilight but rather the soldiers and world she helped create hence the different name style.
So indirectly effects by the series as a whole but not events directly.
I hope that clears things up.
Soooooo, next chapter?😁
Please tell me that you didn't abandon this story
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I did not, just IRL stuff has been going on that is taking focus and energy so haven't had time to sit down and write between the stress from work and then trying to destress when not at work.