I wonder how Sunset is gonna react when she sees the Dazzlings

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Oh-ho, that's a scene I'm gonna enjoy writing

I wonder who is next for the ride of the lifetime?

9792929
Here's a few good hints: this young lady is engaged, her fiance has a little sister who loves books and finally, she works for a principal who blackmailed her fiance's little sister.

9793117
is it ok if i say it?

9793122
sure

Cadence.

9793150
BINGO, WE HAVE A WINNER!!!

9793151
Oh boy hope Shining doesn't find out*pulls on collar*.

9793156
you'd be surprised on what I have in store

9793163
Interest peaked but i'll wait also glad to see you getting back into writing.

Well done

Great chapter

im glad we got more of this to enjoy, hoping for more to come but no rush

I find this Chapter very satisfying to me, just because I love the sirens especially Sonata. If they find me I let myself be at their mercy. Good work

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

9851265
eventually. Look if there were at least 4 of me, I'd be getting it done a lot sooner

9851287
Or if you didn't split your attention up between several different stories

9851292
You try having hundreds of people wanting an update on TWELVE unfinished stories

9851693
Maybe you shouldn't have started 11 of those stories and just focused on one at a time so you might can actually finish one

9851721
Don't go giving him your stinking attitude! He's got loads of ideas that pop up in his head and you think he has full contorl over that, cut him some slack, he's going the best he can or keep your heartless comments to yourself

9851721
Now listen here. He has TWELVE unfinished stories he needs to finish! He has a schedule he needs to follow AND he has a real life. Don't start disrespecting him like that because he has a tight schedule and uploading process. He has a lot of other things to do, I'm trying to help him out of writers block so he can get back to writing more and more stories for his fans. If you can't accept that he has other stories to write and a life to live, then get out of here.

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All I said was The truth

9852267
That's your problem. You don't got enough compassion or remorse to show that he's struggling. I've read Israel's blog posts and if you had any idea how rough he has it, you'll shove that truth back down your throat and apologize, he might have his health back on track, but putting all this stress on him isn't gonna get him to work faster. Think about what you say before you open up your mouth

9852306
Any human being knows there limits. He shouldn't have started 12 stories if he knew he wasn't going to be able to finish them

9852267
Wow, you honestly think you're in the right? How stupid are you? Open your eyes. Israel had a lot of stories to write, he has a tight schedule. Stop complaining that he's taking so long.

9852311
Dude, that's enough. Either say something nice or take your cold, dark heart somewhere else. I write for fun, not for guys like you to put me down on when the next chapter will be up and how many stories I need to finish

9852314
He could of started the other stores when he finished the first all I'm saying

9852327
You see? This is why I can't update my stories, you just spout out so much pessimistic garbage. You keep this up, all this stress is gonna go straight to my heart, then NONE of my stories will get finished and who will you have to blame? Yourself

9852327
Also. stories*

9852327
Now, stop complaining and suck it up and be patient.

At the risk of being in a tornado full of hatred towards a genius, I think you should take your time and work your way around the best you can. Btw, it’s the most awesome chapter I’ve ever read so far.

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thanks

You're my bro, so I'm gonna give it to you straight forward. Take all the breather and time you need. Don't listen to these impatient, entitled a-holes, you bring out the joy of a lot of readers. Whatever you make, whatever you got, it's good for a lot of people. You may not be able to please all, but you most certainly can please other people. Keep up the good work and good luck.

10060962
...right

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You bring out a lot of stories and no matter what, you'll always make them amazingly good like you always do.

This was a awesome regiment chapter for the harem.