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Oh, wow, I... I'm sorry... but you seriously need to go back to the drawing board on this.
I just look at the first paragaraph, and I see what seems like no regard for punctuation, pacing, formatting, or anything like that.
By the way, the chapter title should be spelt 'Disappointment' instead of:
1583593 okay so other than that is the story fine or what?