Celestia asks a very special favor from Twilight; for Twilight to carry Celestia's first foal in millennia. But Celestia's just a mare, how is that possible? She's -is- just a mare, right? Right?
10942504 Well, Celestia did re-write history to suit her own narrative in canon. Not really a stretch to assume that she didn't do it more than advertised.
10943201 For one I’m not entirely sure when she did that, but also Star Swirl and the pillars are way older then her and seen throughout the comics and season 7 finale. That’s not exactly something you can “rewrite” as it were. Unless you mean everything she’s saying in this fic is a changed history
Ah, yes, that. I honestly added that on a whim, but you're right in that I'm kinda changing the backstory quite a lot. I guess I was thinking of how ancient and influential the princesses are, and kinda forgot that there were those even before them...including the Pillars. As such, yeah, I'm gonna just go ahead and remove this bit outright.
10944097 She wasn't erased, her story just changed over the generations. She had a holiday named after alter ego because that’s how ponies/their culture remembered her over time. Now you could say why didn’t Celestia try keep the facts straight, which there’s probably a multitude of answers you could give but that’s still a little different then Celestia going out of her way to actively rewrite/erased history
In both interactions you described Twilight being positioned with a spine towards Celestia's belly. The problem is such position can't physically work because Twilight wouldn't be able to lick Celestia's marehood and be licked back at the same time without some excessive backward head bending. On top of that Twilight have a horn which would impale Celestia's stallionhood in the first case and her belly in the second. Well, in second case she could have rotated her head a bit, but you haven't mention anything like that. In both interactions it makes more sense for them to assume classic 69 position.
In both interactions you described Twilight being positioned with a spine towards Celestia's belly.
Nope, only in the latter one. In the first one, they were in basically a sideways 69, with each facing the other's crotch. Guess I wasn't very specific, sorry.
As for the second one, yes, Twi was on her belly with Celestia mounting over her. You're right in that this would be VERY difficult to accomplish with deepthroating a cock that big at that angle, and that her horn could be moved to rest diagonally along her flank.
On top of that Twilight have a horn which would impale Celestia's stallionhood in the first case(discussed before) and her belly in the second. Well, in second case she could have rotated her head a bit, but you haven't mention anything like that.
This is semi-true for the second one, as I commented above, but not the first one, as Twi's horn was pointing towards Celestia's haunches, with Twi's muzzle in Cellie's crotch. I specified their position in the first session more clearly, and changed the first one so Twi starts out behind Celestia, then is moved into a sideways 69, and the second session so Twi's laying on her back instead, a much more realistic position when deepthroating something so long (no weird angles, just a straight shot down her throat if she straightens her neck), and her horn pointing towards the floor/bed when her head's back. Thanks for pointing this out!
nice work
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Well, Celestia did re-write history to suit her own narrative in canon. Not really a stretch to assume that she didn't do it more than advertised.
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For one I’m not entirely sure when she did that, but also Star Swirl and the pillars are way older then her and seen throughout the comics and season 7 finale. That’s not exactly something you can “rewrite” as it were.
Unless you mean everything she’s saying in this fic is a changed history
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Ah, yes, that. I honestly added that on a whim, but you're right in that I'm kinda changing the backstory quite a lot. I guess I was thinking of how ancient and influential the princesses are, and kinda forgot that there were those even before them...including the Pillars. As such, yeah, I'm gonna just go ahead and remove this bit outright.
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Hey man it’s all good, it’s your fic after all
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Just add the Alternate Universe tag and you'll be fine.
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I mean, episode 1. Luna being erased fron history to start.
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She wasn't erased, her story just changed over the generations. She had a holiday named after alter ego because that’s how ponies/their culture remembered her over time.
Now you could say why didn’t Celestia try keep the facts straight, which there’s probably a multitude of answers you could give but that’s still a little different then Celestia going out of her way to actively rewrite/erased history
this was a wildly intresting chapter,Can you make a Luna and Big Mac fic
In both interactions you described Twilight being positioned with a spine towards Celestia's belly. The problem is such position can't physically work because Twilight wouldn't be able to lick Celestia's marehood and be licked back at the same time without some excessive backward head bending. On top of that Twilight have a horn which would impale Celestia's stallionhood in the first case and her belly in the second. Well, in second case she could have rotated her head a bit, but you haven't mention anything like that. In both interactions it makes more sense for them to assume classic 69 position.
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Nope, only in the latter one. In the first one, they were in basically a sideways 69, with each facing the other's crotch. Guess I wasn't very specific, sorry.
As for the second one, yes, Twi was on her belly with Celestia mounting over her. You're right in that this would be VERY difficult to accomplish with deepthroating a cock that big at that angle, and that her horn could be moved to rest diagonally along her flank.
This is semi-true for the second one, as I commented above, but not the first one, as Twi's horn was pointing towards Celestia's haunches, with Twi's muzzle in Cellie's crotch. I specified their position in the first session more clearly, and changed the first one so Twi starts out behind Celestia, then is moved into a sideways 69, and the second session so Twi's laying on her back instead, a much more realistic position when deepthroating something so long (no weird angles, just a straight shot down her throat if she straightens her neck), and her horn pointing towards the floor/bed when her head's back. Thanks for pointing this out!