Sorry this chapter took so long. I was writing it as half of a chapter, but decided to split it in two. The next chapter is already partially written with most of the lewdness. Yes, even the characters in the story seem annoyed by the lack of lewdness.

Oh, that ending was perfect. Evil is no match for Fluttershy’s adorable innocence. Great chapter overall. Looking forward to more.

Wait I wanna know who the other two girls are. At least let one of them be Fleur.

Is 'Evil' Sour Sweet or Sugarcoat?

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Given the way she seemed to know exactly what everyone was thinking (and thus could tell if they were lying), I half thought it was Sunset Shimmer.

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Evil is from Crystal Prep, not CHS.

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And I wasn't convinced that was true at first.

Without a doubt, my favorite aspect is the consistency and pacing of your writing. A story like this could easily get super cheesy or excessively vulgar; but you manage an excellent balance of story, humor, & clop.

The ending was comedy gold
Love it!

I have 3 questions...
1.When will the next chapter coming?
2.Would it be okay if u keep us informed?
3.And is the next chapter about Rarity being tortured by that evil Evil?

"Ummmm, Yay?”

Reminds me of

<inhale> "yay"

This ... is definitely not what I expected when I started reading, and I'm definitely here for the the story plot. I can totally believe Fluttershy wanting to stay to be a friend for Sontata, err, Snuggles, as well as the whole "I need a new place to live".

"Discovery Family?" ha! good one

“Guys... before we start eating, I just want to make a quick announcement,” a voice spoke up from the center of the table. “If your girl gets sick or injured… just take her to an actual doctor to get her looked at. The vets in this town are getting tired of seeing us, you hear me? It’s no longer funny to them. Okay? Good. Let’s eat.”

Tartarus, that was funny!

Tartarus, that ending was pure comedy gold.