While I read the description, I thought the story was going to be a crossover with Sword Art Online.

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Same genre. Isekai manga, SAO was just more or less the forerunner for the genre's current level of popularity and they tend to have similar tropes. Guy goes to a different world (either after dying or being stuck in a VR machine of some sort), becomes either super popular (and hates it) or everyone hates him and he gets revenge while becoming progressively more edgy, black-clothed, gun-wielding in a sword-and-magic land, and picks up a harem while he's at it (he generally acts like he doesn't like his harem, of course, because that's cool or something). And of course, he's got a bunch of crazily OP power-fantasy abilities that no one should have, so he can afford to do whatever he wants.

I'm reading 70+ of them currently, so I feel I've got a pretty good grasp on it.

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Only 70+? How cute.

That said, this story is just plain awful.

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What is it you dislike about the story? I'd like to find out so I can try to improve

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I watched it in the same place... and keep rewatching it aswell.

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It combines too many iffy bits of the fandom

Combining one of the greatest piece of trash writer's self fulfilment fanfiction ever written with one of the most epic isekai ever made... I don't know how I feel about this...

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Ez-004 isn't from the series.

...... Now that I read most of what I am able to? This is my response.
But to make it more concrete? Its cringe. First off you use a generic character and copy/paste of a series to implement into the story. Add to the boot you included them being displace. While I don't have a problem with displace stories? I do feel a bit annoyed if they just use the name of the character they are instead of who they are. Granted it works well enough in some stories, but not well in others. Not to mention that its all...wrong. The way the story progress is very rush, the fact the guy is a replica of the MC of this isekai its base off of (and seemingly to add other parts of that world into this from what I can tell) and just...
It just feels...well the link enough should be clear on what I feel. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5FjWe31S_0g

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OKay, I thank you for your time in reading this and your opinion, on it.

about time someone ( pony) did this !!!

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Somebody did what exactly?

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made a story for the anime !!!!! right?

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yeah, I was surprised that nobody else had yet.

How interesting this shall be a very good interesting v story

“Oh no, there are at least four, called themselves ‘cardinal heroes’ or something like that, honestly none of them were very heroic if I am being honest.”

The Rising of the Shield Hero maybe.

Chapter 3 (rewritten) and Chapter 5 (rewritten) are the same chapter.

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Thank you for pointing out my mistake. I have now updated this to the correct chapter. I hope you give the chapter a read when you can

“Made by using sentient bodies, no thanks.” She retorted as her last mech boots made a click and stood up.

I'm sure you'll find plenty of food in the frozen wasteland -_-

“Okay, if that's everything of use; we better get it loaded up into the wagon and get moving.” Satou responded, looking at everyone. “I’ll get Frostine moving while you all get connected to the cart and ready to go.”

Okay but what did she find?

So far its good