It's okay, the grammar could use some fixing. Maybe fix up the writing a bit, I barely noticed they were raping her until I was told that this was the case. Maybe some flavor text here and there and writing the sounds of moans or actions. Didn't really get much from the sheriff's point of view during the ordeal.
But for a short and to the point clop fiction, ya did the deed my good sir and the deed was done well enough. Always keep improving your writing. Clop fiction is more than just inserting a dick inside something, it too is a story.
9942956 Yeah, I hardly even try on these. My other account where I post all of my non clop I have stories that I worked for years on and they still don't get nearly as much views or likes as this garbage.
I have a good feeling I know who this character is, they seem to like them getting captured and used.
Also wow, you spoke this for Speech-to-text? That’s something, reading porn is one thing but actually speaking it out, even if it’s in a private place for something to listen to? That’s certainly something
9951279 Advertising to multiple groups helps alot. People appreciate an active writer. I put my own story on a good dozen or more folders of popular groups as well as some less popular ones.
Awesome job man! Another good read,I can't wait to see what you put out next.
jup don't try and mess with raiders just kill em all
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Lol
I think she learned that
good stuff, glad to see you writing more!
It's okay, the grammar could use some fixing. Maybe fix up the writing a bit, I barely noticed they were raping her until I was told that this was the case. Maybe some flavor text here and there and writing the sounds of moans or actions. Didn't really get much from the sheriff's point of view during the ordeal.
But for a short and to the point clop fiction, ya did the deed my good sir and the deed was done well enough. Always keep improving your writing. Clop fiction is more than just inserting a dick inside something, it too is a story.
9942956
Yeah, I hardly even try on these. My other account where I post all of my non clop I have stories that I worked for years on and they still don't get nearly as much views or likes as this garbage.
9951279
Yeah I know what you mean, but you know how it is, people are HUNGRY for clop fics
I have a good feeling I know who this character is, they seem to like them getting captured and used.
Also wow, you spoke this for Speech-to-text? That’s something, reading porn is one thing but actually speaking it out, even if it’s in a private place for something to listen to? That’s certainly something
9951279
Advertising to multiple groups helps alot. People appreciate an active writer. I put my own story on a good dozen or more folders of popular groups as well as some less popular ones.
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Yeah... and I'm probably going to have to do that, but it just feels like I'm desperate when I do that.
I prefer my work to speak for itself