clever girl

9478701
Clever indeed

Now this one was nicely done, I just wish it was longer :P

9501698
I'll try and do longer ones.

Any new ideas in the works?

9656606
I have one basically done but it's kinda dark.

I'm not sure Imma post it.

9694843
There's only a few dark-clop FOE stories that I've seen. Can't be any worse than "The Raider" if you've seen that one. It's not on Fimfiction tho.

9695456
It's from the perspective of a Raider, but it's not really filled with Gore and blood... Just lots of non con

9695826
Well if that's it, then you're good.

9695867
Aye... I'll publish this sucker then..

Wasn’t sure whether or not I should comment on this story, because I’m probably just overanalyzing what’s supposed to be a collection of smut stories, but I think I can waste a few minutes of my life for this. A fair warning: I like to be nitpicky about minor stuff, so feel free to ignore my ramblings.
First of all, this reminds me more of a post-apocalypse version of F.A.T.A.L. than Fallout. If you’re female everything is trying to rape you and if you’re male you’re trying to rape everything. It doesn’t feel like something that takes place in the setting of Fallout Equestria. Not even a Fallout Equestria that runs on porn logic.
Now I’ve to admit that I only read Chapter 2 and skimmed over the others, because outright rape simply isn’t my cup of tea. But from what I’ve seen the only reference to FO:E are the Hell Hounds and RedEye being namedropped once. So basically, this could take place in any generic post apocalypse setting. A few more reference to FO:E would’ve been appreciated.
I’m not going to talk about the first, third and fourth story. Not my fetishes so I don’t think I’ve the right to talk about or criticizes them. But the second story… that’s the one I really enjoyed. I kind of have a fetish for stories that involve MC and dubious consent instead of outright rape.
Still, I think there’s room for improvements. Personally I like having more-fleshed out characters in my clop stories. Makes it more interesting than generic, easily replaceable ponies with bland personalities. It a shame that we never learnt the names of the sisters or that the main focus was solely on the older sister. It’s also a bit odd that all the raiders are male. In a setting like Fallout: Equestria there should be a somewhat equal number of stallions and mares in your average raider gang.
Personally I would love to read another chapter about the sisters new live with the raiders. Maybe with a few scenes from the perspective of the younger sisters or even some of the raiders, to make them more distinct from each other. But again that’s just my personal preferences, so I won't blame anyone for disagreeing with me or prefering the "darker" stuff in the third and fourth story.