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Ohhh boy, that was awfully close to Tempting Murphy
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who's to say he DIDN'T trigger Murphy
Ok, about Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle... their names consist of two seperate words. Al least according to both the wiki and the show credits.
I also noticed a small thing in the following sentences:
Missing a " at the start of this sentence.
I think you meant to use "where's" here.
Maybe I missed a few things, maybe I didn't. I can't say for sure. But all in all, this was not too bad. Just remember to pay attention to details, even small ones. :)
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Im super happy you pointed out their names. Originally I wrote them capitalized properly but then I thought nah this can't be right and also thanks for the mistakes pointing them out.
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Glad to help.
I just gotta say this needs heavy editing. there are a lot of missed , and the structure is off.
Ah numbers.
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what numbers?
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Exactly
Numbers