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A part of me isn't looking forward to Celestia killing Trollestia. Seeing her double commit suicide is one thing. But her willingly killing another her. That seems like it'd make her like the antagonist from "The One". Part of me wants Mollestia to do it, if they do kill her. Or Mollestia being the voice of reason to keeping the troll alive (but binding her to being Discord's houseguest for all eternity. Or finding the cure to Starswirl's Pink Elixir.).
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You're welcome . And I got a laugh from that typo too ^_^.
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Fixed, thx.
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You're welcome . You have a really fun fic and really do a good job on it .
Dropped it.
While it's not a bad fic, it could use much help to become a good one. While author gets what pranking is, trolling is not the same as pranking. The pranks are rather... bland (real internet trolls are way more impressive than the "best troller"), the language is rather poor and unwieldy. I had to struggle with words and phrases smelling of bureaucracy to get to the core.
Surprisingly enough, intimate scenes probably feel the most "alive" of it all, even if many of them look terribly forced and lack serious plot/character support. It's not a clopfic in a strict sense, however, and the "adventuring" part is where the author dropped the ball. Still, the ideas are quite interesting - if only he could spin them the right way...
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It's a fan fiction involving twitter based universes and ideas that I threw together from feedback. It's over 5 years old. I don't want to spin them in just the right way. I just want to use my ideas in ways that are interesting, and different. This is how I sometimes wind down at the end of my days. If I were publishing it as a real book, however, that would be different.
*Sniffs computer*
Huh, well how about that...? Why haven't I ever noticed that smell before?