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Twilight's anxiety has her pretty bad here. Still hasn't found her equilibrium.
Silly Moonlight, that never actually works like you think it will. You both have pretty obvious quirks, and at least one of you isn't very good at masking them at all.
Rarity probably figures it out in... five minutes? Ten on the outside. She has an eye for details and they both left enough similarities that I would think Rarity's keen eye would pick them out.
Especially if either one makes a mistake and is too 'familiar' with Rarity.
And I hope Twilight can find her balance and calm down!
Hmm. Prediction for Rarity figuring them out. Luna still speaks with archaic english, Rarity asks about it, Twilight goes through her usual nervous mannerisms in an attempt to cover for Luna and Rarity identifies her on the spot.
That or Rarity just picks up on Twilights mannerisms in general and starts subtly needling her for information until she confirms her suspicions.
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Either I've been inconsistent, or you missed a detail...
Luna does not speak to everyone... that way
They wouldn't do such an beginner mistake, now would they?
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It could easily be me missing that detail. An unfortunate side effect of reading too many ongoing stories at once.
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Don't ask me... I have to write one as well *looks at the 1100 stories in my read later libaty... hehe... One day... I am under 1000 again...
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I understand, (glances at the 936 stories in Read Later) I understand all too well.
Not sure why Rarity would be enraged. More likely she would assume a lovers tryst in disguise and start planning wedding dresses and theoretical baby clothes.
Ohhh I’d forgotten all about kitty Luna! The beginning of this was adorable!
Can I say that I unabashedly enjoyed this, and would love some more, please and thank you?
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more is on the way :) >> I am sorry that I take so long... work and university, as well as life, is a bit of a bitch
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You are allowed to have a life - please take care of yourself! Plus, forcing yourself isn't going to improve the quality of the story, so I'd rather wait than make you rush XD I just wanted to let a talented author know that I personally really enjoyed their work, and looked forward to their next effort!
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very much appreciated
I am totally loving this fic! I really need more Twilight/Celestia/Luna in my life!
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coming soon... I may have thrown the next chapter out of the window today... but I know what I didn't like :)
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Oh? did things go down the wrong path?
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well... I backed myself into a corner a bit... I found to my dismay that I had once again let Twilight faint...
well... I don't think that's characteristic... She may still be weakened... but she is not fainting or... outright comatose sleeping all the time...
I was not happy with that :) so I scrapped that and wrote it more down the line where I wanted initially to continue to...
;) I will not say too much... but Twilight and Luna will go shopping quite a bit... world-building and such :P I consider it important :)
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As you ought! XD you should write what you like, and world building is DELICIOUS! XD
Happy New Year! hope you are doing well!
Love your story. (this was actually one of the first few I read on the site- it pushed me into my 'I can only ship these three Princesses with each other or I get this weird, uncomfortable feeling in my gut that screams "wrong".' and I cannot thank you enough for that. love your story though, cant wait for the next chapter.)
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trying my best to find more hours in a day... cause I want to continue as well
I hope this gets continued someday.
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Sorry for not responding to this earlier, somehow didn’t notice it at the time. I often reread stories either to remind myself of the details or just because I felt like reading a particular story again. On the last reread I noticed that when Starlight is commenting on Twilight’s distaste of gossip on noble activities she mentions Twilight is a noble. While it’s not particularly important I took the time to point out that Twi is royalty as opposed to nobility. For whatever reason I know way more than most about the vagaries of Royal and Noble titles and common succession rules, and am a pedant by nature so I felt compelled to share some of said knowledge. Besides even if what Starlight said is technically wrong it would be easy to imagine that most ponies wouldn’t have any idea what the difference would be because until 5 years ago no one was really in a position to even discuss succession of the throne.
And while I could see Twi correcting such mistakes I wouldn’t be surprised if she hesitated to correct her friend when it would basically be announcing she is technically more important than the nobles. So yeah, no real criticism of the piece, just shared info because my somewhat diseased mind demanded it.
still love this story, and look forward to it's continuation!
The story has been enjoyable so far and I hope you continue it.
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I AM GETTING TO IT... Live sucks... and so does my motivation...
For anyone thinking my story is dead, it is not. I am still around and I want to get the next chapter out, I simply suck at time management and real live.
I am currently working on the tail end of my university degree and hence have not really found a lot of free time next to my work.
Well... to make a long story short, I apologize for the delay. I had planned to bring the next chapter out during Christmas, but a family emergency made me spend most of my time in the hospital and I am currently working on my Bachelors Thesis next to my exams. I plan to finally get the next chapter out once I have either of the 2 done, whichever comes first.
Mailmares.
Hmmm, someone getting rid of letters to Luna? Interesting, are they being mean or is there more to this? Is someone intentionally trying to get rid of all letters from Rarity to Luna? And why?