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TwiPie is best pairing
But seriously, good fic.
This is better than what I expected! Good job for that. I like the changing perspectives that you had in the earlier chapters. Although the "Fluttershy likes Dash and she goes to seek out everyone's advice" plot has been used before, it doesn't take away from the story too much. TwiPie was unexpected, to say the least. I could have sworn that Twilight had taken advantage of Dash being asleep. spelling/grammar mistakes are there, especially capitalization, but there isn't to anything too obvious. Great job so far, Liked and Faved.
And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW
1055893 Thanks for the compliments! Yea, considering that *glances left and right* I have yet to have a single chapter proofread... I don't think I'm doing too terribly bad lol. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Twilight_Sparkle.png
HAD to add a twist in there to throw "the usual" progression out the door a bit though I will say that, yes, the Fluttershy asking her friends for advice is almost a cliche in and of itself now but that's possibly because many a brony/pegasister author on here believes that's what she would do.
... Also, I said no rape in this fic so no Twi-Rape!!
Okay, this story just got so awesome....Twipie!
Seriously, those two are weak spots when it comes to fan-fics. One of my favourite shippings.
Why is it that every flutterdash I read has a side of Twinkie?! It makes me half-hate life now.