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..... GO FLUTTER DASH
Eff yeah, gt here before FlutterDash7, I think... Anyways, great story, good plot, although it's one that is much too commonly used, but I still enjoyed it. But I also found some flaws.
End of first paragraph. You capitalized Face in face Fluttershy.
4th paragraph, that's a semi-colen, not a quotation mark.
When fluttershy tells angel about her dreams, you forgot to capitalize Angel.
1029175 Whoops! Lol, thanks for pointing those out!
Morning wings? xD
When the rooster wakes her up, you call it a foul. The correct term for a bird would be fowl, as foul means disgusting or revolting. Yes, I'm a grammar Nazi.
Other than that, enjoy your new like!
Not bad.
read rest later.
grammar malfunctions
~Wywint