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love it as always, still don't understand why it has so many dislikes.
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Bad grammar, lots of poor spelling, many incorrect homonyms, the story is starting to get convoluted, and lots of logical inconsistencies such as them being critically low on supplies but them suddenly pulling better equipment out of seemingly nowhere.
It's an entertaining story. But it needs a LOT of polishing.