Sequel to "Devastation By A Hybrid's Rage." With the struggle against the Wonderbolts behind them, Indominus, Rainbow and the rest of the family are enjoying peace at last. Things take a turn when Rainbow gives birth to a daughter...and a son.
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Woo! Indoraptor has achieved super saiyen 3!!! Lol
At last Indoraptor has finally put an end to those horrible mares and gain his Worldbreaker form. Not to mention he and Blackjack kissed that brought happiness to me. This was an amazing chapter Venom and can't wait to read more! I also loved the bit with Rainbow Dash and Rexy and how Scootaloo was beginning to come to her senses about this dilemma.
With Indoraptor's WorldBreaker form finally unlocked, I believe this new power boost has finally cured our hybrid hero of his disease. Indoraptor's chances for survival are at an all-time high thx to his unlocked potential, along with the mares that helped mend and heal his broken heart when he was at his lowest.
...yeah, uh, just... no. Your protags have committed a lot of horrible acts and we're expected to think of them as 'heroes'. But this tops them all. For ten minutes your heroes tortured a villain in extremely gruesome fashion, even as she begged for her life and were given the a-okay to do so.
This is not the act of anyone heroic, this is the act of a villain and this is the act of someone sinking to their rapist's level and getting away with it. This is do unto others as they did to you in the most terrible of fashion. If this is the world where torture like this is allowed, I fear for it. Congratulations, your heroes have crossed a line that is impossible to come back from. They are no longer heroes, if they ever were.
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Are you really sure you're okay with this story? This is not the story of heroes anymore, this is a story of torture and everyone allowed to get away with it. These are not characters to look up to, in any other universe they'd be called monsters.
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I don’t view them as heroes. I just view them as individuals. Different people make different choices. I make similar choices to them yet those who know me never view me as a monster nor ‘hero’.
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I think your just making a HUGE Mistake on saying that. Because, I just think you only read this particular chapter! Instead of reading the entire story, or even the entire series to get the whole picture. I think you will most definitely change your mind IF you actually read the other stories to know that the Dinosaurs are NOT "Villains". And are just Anti-Heroes, and they did save Equestria many times from the REAL Evil, and other Villains.
And as for this:
Then those particular Universes are Morality Wrong, and Naively STUPID!!!!!!!! Because, why the Hell are they defending a Frickin Child molester rapists ( Scorpion, Dear Darling, Fond Feather, Swoon Song, and their "Army" of horny mare rapist whores!!!!!!)??!!
Besides, don't you know that the Dinosaurs are Royalty now?! Both Indominus Rex and even Rainbow Dash are both King and Queen of Equestria from the last story. And Indoraptor is technically a Prince. So, not only did those rapist psychos not only rape, and attempted to ASSASSINATE a Equestrian Prince while they at it. And the Punishment is definitely Death in Real Life. So, the Dinosaurs are Morality Right to end the Evil Rapists and send them to Hell!!!!
And even the Main Six, and the fellow citizens of Ponyville agrees to defend the Dinosaurs that are their friends, are now royalty, and even Save the World multiple times in fact. And why should they defend horrible mares that are both rapists/kid molesters, and even try to KILL them to Twilight and her Friends! Why would you frickin defend the horrible mares for their justified death sentence?!
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Would you believe me if I told you dbz had nothing to do with the inspiration for his form? The inspiration is from an old icon of mine who just keeps getting more ferocious and powerful with each incarnation.comicvine1.cbsistatic.com/uploads/original/11119/111192788/4390571-2382295077-19585.jpg
Hulk, or to be more specific: World Breaker Hulk
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Eh, this kind of torture & violence doesn't bother me at all. I'm used to it
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Besides, the Torture and the "Violence" is used against despicable evil Ponies, like the Rapist Mares. Or Neighsay, Cozy Glow, Scootaloo's Horrible "Parents", Soarin, and Sombra himself. So, they are highly justified, and Evil People/Ponies deserve the best Violence and Torture against them.
Update please when you have the time. 😟
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You were rather too late to say that, since I only said it back in last Sunday.
But, I got the message. It's just he keeps updated his Story for a Long Time now.
Sorry I took so long to speak again in here, TyrannosaurusVenom. Anyway, I finally happy that those pony bitches deserve their karmic punishment for their actions against Indoraptor.
But still, I still don't know why the heck you even done that horrible thing to the poor dino in the damn first place???!!! This is the first time you done f******* rape in your stories. And this is the only reason why I didn't like or hate in this story.
I miraculously still love this story ( And your Jurassic Park/World Crossover Series ), but I still fell bitter and upset about this part.
And it doesn't help that the stupid racism/xenophobic/prejudice from some ponies against the Dino's is idiotic at best. Despite that the Dino's themselves SAVE the FRICKIN Planet, TWICE!!!!! And Indominus Rex is the King of Equestria for Faust's sake!
So, Neighsay is doing frickin treason for his dumbass negative views against the Dinosaurs.
And I thought Indoraptor short lifespan, because of his severe health issues. Or Rex's "youth" problems, or his relationship with Scootalo was frickin bad enough as it is??!!
Plus, it doesn't make damn sense, since he is a badass dinosaur?! He could have frickin killed those evil whores in the beginning ( But you just have to make a Psychotic Hybrid Scorpion Bitch OC to poison him, for depressing "plot" reasons?! ).
Plus, their "plan" makes no damn sense in the long run, and has major plot holes. Why??!! Well, they said they want the Dinosaur Hybrids or even a Pure Dinosaur kid for their "own"?
And I bet they probably do mess up things to their own dino children, IF they somehow "succeed" in the end???!!! F******* Whores!!!
But, doesn't the birth FRICKIN KILL THEM ALL in the process??!! Think about it, look what happened to Rainbow during the birthing process in the very beginning!!!!!
The reason she is still alive, is because of her Giant Dinosaur Hybrid Transformation and Worldbreaker Powers. And with the additional help of Indominus Rex's and the other Dino Family powers, and Discord.
So, how the heck can these poor idiot mares even survive their birthing process WITHOUT all of that???!!!
This is a major plothole that you didn't even mention or forgot in the chapters?! I can't believe that you or anyone else here didn't even thought about this major plothole that could mess up your story?! No offense.
I hope you can address this later. Because, their plan to make "Dinosaur babies" makes no damn sense! Because Rainbow Dash herself ( despite her Worldbreaker and Dinosaur Hybrid Transformation ) almost died giving birth to Indoraptor and Viper?!
But luckily, that won't matter. Because they are brutally executed, and it is justified to do so!!!!! Because, Indoraptor is technically a PRINCE of Equestria, because of Indominus Rex's and Rainbow's royal status.
And those stupid bitches have the audacity to also attack Princess Twilight and her heroic friends too????!!!!
That is a very good justification for a death sentence and be executed by the Dinosaurs themselves. So, basically they CAN'T do the "Dinosaurs can't kill ponies" BS card against the now Royal Dino Family!
Because they are criminals, and Rapists/Child Molesters ( Because Indoraptor is technically a kid/teen in his dino years back then. ) DON'T deserve mercy.
Hope that I didn't upset you for revealing my feelings about this?