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yeah that sword is a oddity.
The pacing of the story seems rushed to me. Try extending the scenes slightly to let the story flow better.
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That makes perfect sense, I think...lol
LIFE DOESN'T GIVE YOU SEATBELTS!
"genjutsu which involves trapping someone’s mind"
No it's not, it literally means illusionary techniques. It influences a persons brain via chakra invading and manipulating the person to experience things not there. This along with your quite frankly atrocious power scaling(nerfing literally all his skills and power) makes me doubt if you know much about naruto in the first place other than surface level stuff.
That picture in the author's note, where do you do that
Whoa Zeko looked a lot like Pain.