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What's up with the dislikes? This is a good story. Some retard probably placed this story in a group that it did not belong and the members got pissed and disliked this. Good story though. Keep it up!
are you trying to bring the red claw from dc universe batman or is this a actual thing in the mlp universe??????
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There's a lot of cliches and pointless things, the powerlevel seems random, and most of Zeko's abilities seem more 'bcuz cool' than anything really coherent or consistent.
And I say this as someone who's read quite a bit of Naruto and Naruto fanfiction.
The early chapters in particular are badly written, at least mechanically. There are plenty of paragraphs with multiple speakers and the like.
And as for the story itself, so far it's been nothing special. There hasn't been something that especially stood out to me as new or extremely interesting or funny.
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Well criticism is criticism, I can’t disagree that my earlier chapters are lacking but I’d like to say I improved as I went on. As for your input on the story so far I can’t really sway you in any direction, if you don’t like it as it progresses then I can’t change that and if you find it growing on you then thank you. But for now I would ask that you read on and make your own decisions