I dont know what the dislikes are about I find this to be a good, well written story! The clop itself is always vague though it needs a bit more .... physical detail. Otherwise its great!
This was a nice chapter. Twi did it more out of wanting to experience it than anything else. Even though she didn't want the penetration, she did come to enjoy it all. Caramel just... he needed a bit more tact with his final words. That was just dumb as fuck. And doesn't it make more sense to you people to make a pill for GUYS that sterilizes them for the time being? It makes more sense to unload a gun than to shoot at a bullet proof vest.
"It's something very bad, Spike. Something very, very bad that colts do to mares when they don't want them to."
Either you are very ignorant or you're using Equestrian logic, which is fucked up either way you look at it. Men have been raped by women in the past, and saying that it's just a thing men do to women is quite retarded.
The door shut behind the two. "We'll have to study in my bedroom," Twilight whispered, "since Spike's asleep."
Twilight, did you drink some variety of Stupid Potion this evening? Because if not, then in the words of Detective Spooner, "you are the dumbest smart person I have ever met!"
You're just lucky Caramel has some semblance of self-control left and didn't go past being pushy, or you'd be dealing with a lot worse than awkwardness, shame, and disappointment right now.
4601685 Yes, yes, and men do it to men and women do it to women to, but setting aside the issue of who does it to whom most often, the bottom line is it's a simplified answer given to a child.
You can't trust someone to unload the gun, and it's not the shooter who dies. Ideally, there could be something for him to use and something for her to use, but in the end it's a matter of who can run from the consequences and who's got the consequences in their body. Men are not trustworthy (nor are women, but at the moment that seems less relevant).
filly= young female horse of 3 years or less colt= young male horse of 3 years or less
Mare= adult female horse of breeding age (over 3years) stallion= adult male horse of breeding age (over 3years)
In the MLP fandom the terms are bit more flexible. filly and colt are used for any pony perceived as being under age of consent. Mare and Stallion are used for any adult aged pony. The Mane 6 are all mares. Their attackers are all stallions.
I dont know what the dislikes are about I find this to be a good, well written story! The clop itself is always vague though it needs a bit more .... physical detail. Otherwise its great!
I was looking forword to this one...I wanted to see the reactions....
I was listening to Want It Need It (Orchastral Rock Cover)..I don't know why ,but It fits the chapter...
So it seems Twi and Fluttershy ended up okay with it, but what happened with Applejack is still cruel!
This was a nice chapter. Twi did it more out of wanting to experience it than anything else. Even though she didn't want the penetration, she did come to enjoy it all. Caramel just... he needed a bit more tact with his final words. That was just dumb as fuck. And doesn't it make more sense to you people to make a pill for GUYS that sterilizes them for the time being? It makes more sense to unload a gun than to shoot at a bullet proof vest.
~SolidFire
Hold the fuck up.
Either you are very ignorant or you're using Equestrian logic, which is fucked up either way you look at it.
Men have been raped by women in the past, and saying that it's just a thing men do to women is quite retarded.
Twilight, did you drink some variety of Stupid Potion this evening? Because if not, then in the words of Detective Spooner, "you are the dumbest smart person I have ever met!"
You're just lucky Caramel has some semblance of self-control left and didn't go past being pushy, or you'd be dealing with a lot worse than awkwardness, shame, and disappointment right now.
4601685
Yes, yes, and men do it to men and women do it to women to, but setting aside the issue of who does it to whom most often, the bottom line is it's a simplified answer given to a child.
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You can't trust someone to unload the gun, and it's not the shooter who dies. Ideally, there could be something for him to use and something for her to use, but in the end it's a matter of who can run from the consequences and who's got the consequences in their body. Men are not trustworthy (nor are women, but at the moment that seems less relevant).
you need to get your terminology strait.
filly= young female horse of 3 years or less
colt= young male horse of 3 years or less
Mare= adult female horse of breeding age (over 3years)
stallion= adult male horse of breeding age (over 3years)
In the MLP fandom the terms are bit more flexible. filly and colt are used for any pony perceived as being under age of consent. Mare and Stallion are used for any adult aged pony. The Mane 6 are all mares. Their attackers are all stallions.
Well this chapter is pretty good and could be a one shot fic all on it's own. It has little to tie it to the overall story.
Twilight could have easily been just researching spore molds and fungus without the special flower Rarity used.
Rarity's involvement is even less clear then with Applejack's rape.
I can only hope you have answers in the last two chapters.