She looked at me as she replied "only what most ponies would know, most of the history is restricted to the Draco's and almost most of that is for the royal family".
See, there's actually a lot of potential for some serious conflict here. No matter all the whitewashing, the Dracos invaded another world and took over. The best a pony can look forward to seems to be getting close to the Dracos' status, who are on top of the social order, as servants or concubines. Dracos rule, ponies obey. The fact that they call it an alliance sounds like a rather self-serving narrative.
However, so far, it's all fluffy, happy harem fun with your OC and a herd of submissive girls, much like a majority of your stories appears to be. I'm convinced there won't be a conflict.
On the upside, your OC race at least doesn't read like it's completely overpowered since they don't just solve any problems without any real effort or cost.
9165725 With you pointing that out I guess I forgot to put in the reason for the technical invasion. The Draco's original world wasn't able to fully sustain itself and such most of its plants and crops were being wiped out, with their resources, especially in terms of food, being desperately limited it meant taking quick decisions. The current king was also dying due to an illness so he wanted to ensure the survival of his race before his own life passed on, the first chapter mentioned a portal opening to Equestria but I forgot to mention that the portal had barely been explored. With time being against them the king decided on a quick take over instead of potential peacemaking treaties that might waste too much time. Since the three Pony races were separate at the time it helped make the invasion easier and with little casualties, the end result of the invasion also helped to bring the three Pony Races together granted they still argued about their differences. When the King passed on his son didn't want their race to be feared so he passed the law for them to be considered equal instead of masters and slaves, most of the Draco's aren't of the royal family so they live amongst the Ponies.
As for the history part, most Pony at the time didn't really want to learn about the history of how Equestria was tamed by the Draco's. Even most of the Draco's didn't like their history due to similar feelings and so only the royal family keeps the info so they see where they come from and how they've progressed.
The next part I might address in the next chapter but the ponies don't have to be servants or such if they don't want to be, I'm currently trying to find a way to make it so the girls chose to be his maids and not a forced choice. Rarity is an obviously easy one and I can think of a few ways for some of the others.
I'm just glad that my race worked out somehow, I like dragons but in the MLP world I've never seen any really use any of their own magic. This was even before trying to find out about the newly arriving Kirin race, I tried to make them similar to the basic races so on average they're not on Alicorn levels. The character Wyv is kinda like Unicorn Twilight or Starlight as they have magic considerably strong even for Unicorn standards, and the OC's mother simply has a unique ability kinda like how a Pony gets some unique quirks like Pinkies senses.
I might go back to some of the earlier chapters and rewrite some of the issues.
Nice.
See, there's actually a lot of potential for some serious conflict here. No matter all the whitewashing, the Dracos invaded another world and took over. The best a pony can look forward to seems to be getting close to the Dracos' status, who are on top of the social order, as servants or concubines. Dracos rule, ponies obey. The fact that they call it an alliance sounds like a rather self-serving narrative.
However, so far, it's all fluffy, happy harem fun with your OC and a herd of submissive girls, much like a majority of your stories appears to be. I'm convinced there won't be a conflict.
On the upside, your OC race at least doesn't read like it's completely overpowered since they don't just solve any problems without any real effort or cost.
9165725
With you pointing that out I guess I forgot to put in the reason for the technical invasion.
The Draco's original world wasn't able to fully sustain itself and such most of its plants and crops were being wiped out, with their resources, especially in terms of food, being desperately limited it meant taking quick decisions.
The current king was also dying due to an illness so he wanted to ensure the survival of his race before his own life passed on, the first chapter mentioned a portal opening to Equestria but I forgot to mention that the portal had barely been explored.
With time being against them the king decided on a quick take over instead of potential peacemaking treaties that might waste too much time.
Since the three Pony races were separate at the time it helped make the invasion easier and with little casualties, the end result of the invasion also helped to bring the three Pony Races together granted they still argued about their differences.
When the King passed on his son didn't want their race to be feared so he passed the law for them to be considered equal instead of masters and slaves, most of the Draco's aren't of the royal family so they live amongst the Ponies.
As for the history part, most Pony at the time didn't really want to learn about the history of how Equestria was tamed by the Draco's.
Even most of the Draco's didn't like their history due to similar feelings and so only the royal family keeps the info so they see where they come from and how they've progressed.
The next part I might address in the next chapter but the ponies don't have to be servants or such if they don't want to be, I'm currently trying to find a way to make it so the girls chose to be his maids and not a forced choice.
Rarity is an obviously easy one and I can think of a few ways for some of the others.
I'm just glad that my race worked out somehow, I like dragons but in the MLP world I've never seen any really use any of their own magic.
This was even before trying to find out about the newly arriving Kirin race, I tried to make them similar to the basic races so on average they're not on Alicorn levels.
The character Wyv is kinda like Unicorn Twilight or Starlight as they have magic considerably strong even for Unicorn standards, and the OC's mother simply has a unique ability kinda like how a Pony gets some unique quirks like Pinkies senses.
I might go back to some of the earlier chapters and rewrite some of the issues.