DEAR GOD ima be sad as hell if Rainbow Dash can't fly ever again, that storyline in fanfics seem to be overused in fanfics anyway, so hope you take a original approach! Oh ya and good story so far!
Wierd not being the full on pre-reader this time around, only getting wind of about 3 paragraphs on this chapter before release. Really liked the addition of the internal monologue. See 1040047 I do post comments on here
1040282 Yeah I know, normally I prefer to have you around , but I was to impatient to wait. And yes, you should like the inner monologue, it was your idea ! Which I thank you for, Ive only heard positive back from it. And did I ever say you didnt ?
1040608 I guess the subtly at which I implied I had schizophrenia may have been over looked. But lo and behold "Hazah! The personalities have been doubled!"
I enjoyed reading that (again) and I think it's excellent. I like how you used italics as the inner monologue voice. That helped a lot! Nice job!
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Thanks so much!
DkI am loveing this story cant wait to see how it turns out
yea well written
Twilight lighten up you are so serious
yay shes ok she in a coma
stupid cliffhangers
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Haha, yeah I've been getting that a lot.
DEAR GOD ima be sad as hell if Rainbow Dash can't fly ever again, that storyline in fanfics seem to be overused in fanfics anyway, so hope you take a original approach! Oh ya and good story so far!
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Oh don't worry. You can expect a major twist in chapter 5 or 6 along those lines. MAJOR
Wierd not being the full on pre-reader this time around, only getting wind of about 3 paragraphs on this chapter before release. Really liked the addition of the internal monologue.
See 1040047 I do post comments on here
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Yeah I know, normally I prefer to have you around , but I was to impatient to wait. And yes, you should like the inner monologue, it was your idea ! Which I thank you for, Ive only heard positive back from it. And did I ever say you didnt ?
I don't know, the only time I posted on this story was when I opted-in for pre-reader.
People love their internal monologues, makes them feel somewhat connected (we all have a real one don't we), well for me it's like that.
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People have inner monologues ? That's news to me
1040481 Well I do
But, considering I talk to myself (old habits die hard) it's probably more a select few that have the monologue.
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I have an inner dialogue, but I think that'd more of disorder than standard on which to judge other people.
I suppose, most of the people I know have one, must just be good old England and it's oddities.
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I guess the subtly at which I implied I had schizophrenia may have been over looked. But lo and behold "Hazah! The personalities have been doubled!"
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awwwwwwyeah
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She backed up with a repulsive look.
I expect you mean 'repelled'