9084833 well yeah, of course, I got it certainly helps out it not perfect but might help out a writer if there editor bails on them or their proofreader not around just thought it is a useful tool to recommend.
9084842 I won’t be able to help you, as I hate Naruto and the whole nine tailed fox thing means this is obviously a crossover. That said, I feel like there would be extreme improvements if you just went back and read it yourself. Not skim, read. You’ll find plenty of mistakes that way.
I see what you were going for, but this certainly needs to be rewritten.
Changiles. You misspelled it more than once too.
So... he wasn’t a stallion. He’s a tod.
What? What sword ISN’T made to quickly kill people?
So he has a bloodlust. Okay. What does he look like? Is he just a fox with 9 tails?
Did you read this before posting? You really need to edit it. As it sits it’s a mess. Your summary doesn’t explain ANYTHING either.
Much like the blood of the English language paints this story.
Get an editor. You need one.
so would you considered downloading Grammarly it free!
9084830 Looks like you’re in dire need of it yourself.
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Oh snap.
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Thanks for pointing all of that out. I know it's pretty bad. And if you want to I do need editor for this story if you're interested that is.
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well yeah, of course, I got it certainly helps out it not perfect but might help out a writer if there editor bails on them or their proofreader not around just thought it is a useful tool to recommend.
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I won’t be able to help you, as I hate Naruto and the whole nine tailed fox thing means this is obviously a crossover. That said, I feel like there would be extreme improvements if you just went back and read it yourself. Not skim, read. You’ll find plenty of mistakes that way.
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I wasn't using Naruto in the story as I too dislike it. I was using grimoire of zero with the hole beast fallen thing.
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Still weeb shit. I'm good man.
Wow, i like the story from the first chapter, thats something new
Welp i hope you continue it