The story seems a bit fast pace in the pony seem to be overly friendly might be but if you flush it out more of the characters be more developed maybe For a guy who I just killed a lot of individuals they seem to brush past it except his mental instability
He need a katana and a trenchcoat.
Chicks dig the katana and trenchcoat combo.
shining is in deep shit
Well conner should have the main six plus the two princesses
I think the first two to be in Conners herd is celestia and Luna.
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He got a katana here's what his weapons look's like.
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And both have a wonderful surprise.
Next please
The story seems a bit fast pace in the pony seem to be overly friendly might be but if you flush it out more of the characters be more developed maybe For a guy who I just killed a lot of individuals they seem to brush past it except his mental instability
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Yeah sorry whenever I actually get a chance its steering my break.
And it's more instinctual for The Killing he really can't control it.
Hmm fluttershy in a relationship with the guy seems to come to mind everytime I read something like this when the person is beastial for some reason
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I take it your voting for Fluttershy then?
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Yes and either rainbow or Luna sound like a good idea but idk what his full personality is like