Queen Chrysalis sends her daughter to Crystal Prep Academy to learn how to hunt for love. But can the young princess live up to her mother's expectations and blend in at the same time?
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Glad I finally reached the end of these chapters thus far! Finally caught up with most of the Bloodlines Series.
Now for my thoughts.
I originally expected to see a story where Ebony and Ivory are scheming the next evil plot after the fall of the Assassins and Templars in Leap of Faith and the aliens in A Rift Between Worlds. With the "evil" daughter of Chrysalis hiding among the students of Crystal Prep. Especially with how Chysidea was portrayed at the end of Lost Connection. Also, this was first story in the Bloodlines series that is not a direct crossover with other media like Leap of Faith or Rift Between Worlds so I'm curious where does this go!
And this story definitely goes beyond my expectations!
Slice of Life stories of Chrysidea going to school, learning to socalise, finding love, trying to please her family by being more changeling like and pretty much finding her true self. She's getting slightly better with her personas and I do wonder if we'll ever see more of her Ghost persona.
My feelings of Ivory and Ebony are pretty much my thoughts of Missy in Doctor Who. You're evil but damn aren't you both so entertaining and likeable! Queen Chrysalis also has a tight grip on her daughters life, planning everything perhaps out of love for her daughter or wanting a tighter grip on her child after what happen with Morn Dread who can say?
Also, nice nods to the Assassins with Ivory but she keep mentioninh so much of his ex-boyfriend Assassin thus far that if his fate does not get addressed to her at some point I'll be disappointed.
The mature scenes you implemented in later chapters were unexpected but I do like them as its not just for the clop. You show the feelings Ivory and Ebony getting together (Glad they are not biologically related or things would get weird...), Sunny trying to understand her feelings for Silver and vice versa and Silver facing teenage lust. And I'm glad you also give a warning to readers for mature scenes. Props to you for that.
And finally, this latest chapter leaves a lot on my mind on speculating future chapters.
I wonder will we get to see the perspective from The Rainbooms during Ivory poisoning them with the pink lemonade. Will that become a separate story from this?
I do so hope that Chrysidea becomes a "good person" so to speak. As I would be thoroughly disappointed if it doesn't if she becomes an evil changeling but thus far The Changeling Sisters don't seem to be up to no good other than the upcoming picnic
I also wonder where Home Run, Sunny and Chysidea love triangle that's happening now. Will is all come crashing down? Will she reveal her secret? Will Home Run or Sunny accept her? Will she have to choose between her two lovers? I hope not. Had enough of that in the Twilight series.
One nitpick I have though is that they keeping humming This Day Is Going to Be Perfect too much. Seriously, pick another song you darn changelings!
Overall these series of stories definitely need more likes and comments as they don't seem to have as much as compared to Leap of Faith.
I eagerly await the next chapter A Bag of Plums!
Ia that?? Well played, Plums. Well played
SHE IS A JOJO FAN!?!! She is my favorite changeling now............
Wonder who her fave JoJo is........or is she a part skipper?
I find it funny how Ivory was watching THAT episode of Jojo’s Bizarre Adventure as it contains a stand known for shapeshifting (like a changeling).
pepeLaugh they don't know
New headcanon that Psithyra is this worlds Sun Tzu